My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 203 "The Hangman Cometh."All of my poems of release.
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Comment from Carrie Carson
Oh, this is painfully vivid...but I think that's your point.
Great image you used for this, too.
The human race is an interesting lot...spectacles of others' deaths...
No spag issues caught my eye, good job with this. :) Carrie
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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2012
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Oh, this is painfully vivid...but I think that's your point.
Great image you used for this, too.
The human race is an interesting lot...spectacles of others' deaths...
No spag issues caught my eye, good job with this. :) Carrie
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Comment Written 13-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2012
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Thanks Carrie, yes I am forever left wondering about other's need to see someone else's demise. Thanks for reviewing my poem. :)
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Wow this is a dark descriptive poem you paint the scene very well indeed the crowds gathering the hangman and the victim well done regards Jill
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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2012
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Wow this is a dark descriptive poem you paint the scene very well indeed the crowds gathering the hangman and the victim well done regards Jill
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Comment Written 13-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2012
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Thank so much Jill, it means a lot coming from you. :)