All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 40 "Three Faces of Love"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is very well written you have been very descriptive about the word love it is a short word with so much meaning well done regards Jill
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2012
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Yes this is very well written you have been very descriptive about the word love it is a short word with so much meaning well done regards Jill
Comment Written 28-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2012
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thx Jill!
Comment from angela59
i loved the mother, adult, universal progression of the poem and the way in which it showed your connection with each - each love changing as life progresses. angela59
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i loved the mother, adult, universal progression of the poem and the way in which it showed your connection with each - each love changing as life progresses. angela59
Comment Written 28-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2012
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thx angela!
Comment from c_lucas
Spiritual love - Relationship with your Divinity. Maternal love - love for your child. Romanic Love - The love that makes your world go around. This is very well written.
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Spiritual love - Relationship with your Divinity. Maternal love - love for your child. Romanic Love - The love that makes your world go around. This is very well written.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2012
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thx Charlie!
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You're welcome, Sharlyn. Charlie
Comment from hari anand
First love for your loved ones, second I think lovers love or give and take thing, third love for the humanity, I think forth could be self one people who love themselves or self obsessed ones. Loved your poetry.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2012
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First love for your loved ones, second I think lovers love or give and take thing, third love for the humanity, I think forth could be self one people who love themselves or self obsessed ones. Loved your poetry.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2012
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thanks so much my dear! self love is a whole new ball of wax!
Comment from marilyo
This lovely write on what love is says it all - and we should have it all. I enjoyed how you unraveled each kind of love, like a gift being unwrapped to show its wonderful contents. Your three stanzas were three such gifts.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2012
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This lovely write on what love is says it all - and we should have it all. I enjoyed how you unraveled each kind of love, like a gift being unwrapped to show its wonderful contents. Your three stanzas were three such gifts.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2012
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thank you so much marilyo - so glad you enjoyed it! :) Sharyn
Comment from Maustin
"this one cares for one other, yet
is more of a two way beat, where we meet
and stroll, arm in arm, along Trust Street
I look up with adoration into the depths of your green eyes
breath of my breath, I disappear, cast fear aside,
and the whole wide world becomes part of our aura..."
Lovely work here. Wow, these lines are simply beautiful. Great flow throughout. The presentation is inviting. Like how you defined love in three segments. Very unique indeed. Excellent work.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2012
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"this one cares for one other, yet
is more of a two way beat, where we meet
and stroll, arm in arm, along Trust Street
I look up with adoration into the depths of your green eyes
breath of my breath, I disappear, cast fear aside,
and the whole wide world becomes part of our aura..."
Lovely work here. Wow, these lines are simply beautiful. Great flow throughout. The presentation is inviting. Like how you defined love in three segments. Very unique indeed. Excellent work.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2012
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Thank you so much Maustin! I loved writing these lines and am so glad to be able to "touch" you with those. Blessings for your magic '6'!
Best wishes :) Sharyn
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So welcome Visonary... Very nice.
Blessings,
Miracle*;)~
Comment from misscookie
Good luck in the contest you got my vote
This is a very deep poem.
I enjoyed reading your poem and I like how your poem moves you had my attention from the first line to the last.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2012
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Good luck in the contest you got my vote
This is a very deep poem.
I enjoyed reading your poem and I like how your poem moves you had my attention from the first line to the last.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2012
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thx misscookie!
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Your very welcome, until next time.
Comment from gazzagodbod
fabulous beautifully presented poem love the picture too your work is so good thank you so much for sharing with us gazzagodbod
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2012
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fabulous beautifully presented poem love the picture too your work is so good thank you so much for sharing with us gazzagodbod
Comment Written 27-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2012
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thx gazza!
Comment from EMB
This was a very thought-provoking poem. Curious, though. What about the love of yourself? I think of that being the most important of them all because it dictates so much in our lives without our knowing it.
Something I found:
defenceless (defenseless?)
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2012
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This was a very thought-provoking poem. Curious, though. What about the love of yourself? I think of that being the most important of them all because it dictates so much in our lives without our knowing it.
Something I found:
defenceless (defenseless?)
Comment Written 27-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2012
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ran out of verses Edward! and defenceless is correct in Australia, defenseless in States ... thx my dear!
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Sharyn,
You have penned a beautiful poem for the 'what is love' contest. I love the form you used to write it, with the long lines and expressive words. You have some good internal rhyming which serves to enhance the charm of this piece. Well done and good luck in the contest....blessings, chey
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2012
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Hi Sharyn,
You have penned a beautiful poem for the 'what is love' contest. I love the form you used to write it, with the long lines and expressive words. You have some good internal rhyming which serves to enhance the charm of this piece. Well done and good luck in the contest....blessings, chey
Comment Written 27-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2012
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thx chey!