Who?
Food for thought, despite life's trials39 total reviews
Comment from Newsome
Jimi,
I enjoyed reading this poem so much. It has a wonderful flow to it and I love the choice of artwork. My main interest was the context of this poem. It gives the reader many examples of the perfection of life, in both design and function. With examples like you have given how could one ever doubt the existence of a Divine hand. Regardless of your intent, these are my Christian thoughts. Once again, thank you for sharing your talent with us. I am not permitted to give the sixer this write deserves.
Newsome
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
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Jimi,
I enjoyed reading this poem so much. It has a wonderful flow to it and I love the choice of artwork. My main interest was the context of this poem. It gives the reader many examples of the perfection of life, in both design and function. With examples like you have given how could one ever doubt the existence of a Divine hand. Regardless of your intent, these are my Christian thoughts. Once again, thank you for sharing your talent with us. I am not permitted to give the sixer this write deserves.
Newsome
Comment Written 13-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
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Newsome, once again you humble me and my intent was to arouse people to think and to appreciate life and all it has to offer, so you have hit the mark. You are so special my friend, so special.. jimi
Comment from Meena Jawahrani
Who gives you the spirit to write this lovely piece of work
Who guides you of the flow and rhyming
Who connects you and me and rest of us
And yes if only we could trust this WHO and stop our meaningless interface, life would be so much more beautiful and complete.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
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Who gives you the spirit to write this lovely piece of work
Who guides you of the flow and rhyming
Who connects you and me and rest of us
And yes if only we could trust this WHO and stop our meaningless interface, life would be so much more beautiful and complete.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
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Meena Jawahrani, what an incredible review!!! thank you ever so much. I apologize for just getting back to you... again thank you ever ever so much.. jlsavell
Comment from misscookie
The artwork you posted to go with your poemk is breathtaking.
You had my attention from the first line to the last
yoiur words speaks for it self. It a very uplifting poem to read and a wonderful way to remind us who did all these wonderful things.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
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The artwork you posted to go with your poemk is breathtaking.
You had my attention from the first line to the last
yoiur words speaks for it self. It a very uplifting poem to read and a wonderful way to remind us who did all these wonderful things.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
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misscookie, I apologize for just returning a big thank you and to tell you how much I do appreciate your review and wonderful comments... again thank you ever so much... jlsavell
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No need for that.
It was my pleasure, until next time , my friend.
Comment from Dave M
Jimi,
This poem is an excellent prayer of praise to God, Who did all these things. I enjoyed this poem but have a suggestion. The order of the stanzas seems a bit random. I think a more effective ordering would be to follow the first chapter of Genesis. First the sun and moon, then features of Earth's geography, then the beasts and finally people. For example, I think the stanza about giving birth should be the second to last.
Dave
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
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Jimi,
This poem is an excellent prayer of praise to God, Who did all these things. I enjoyed this poem but have a suggestion. The order of the stanzas seems a bit random. I think a more effective ordering would be to follow the first chapter of Genesis. First the sun and moon, then features of Earth's geography, then the beasts and finally people. For example, I think the stanza about giving birth should be the second to last.
Dave
Comment Written 12-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
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Another big huge thank you. You always always leave me speechless. I have taken your suggestions to heart and now that I have time, I will look at revising the poem. You have a good thought here.. as always... jimi
Comment from emmaysavage
I have no criticisms of this lovely poem, and the art and color are most effective.
I found it deeply spiritual without being evangelistic and the images were very satisfying. Congratulations on an excellent piece.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
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I have no criticisms of this lovely poem, and the art and color are most effective.
I found it deeply spiritual without being evangelistic and the images were very satisfying. Congratulations on an excellent piece.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
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emmaysavage, I apologize for just responding to this exceptional review. I am truly honored and humbled, thank you ever so much... jls
Comment from amarherig14
Excellent poem in which all the statements point to The Creator.This would answer your question: "Who?" My favorite line: "Who filled the lungs for a new birth's."
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
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Excellent poem in which all the statements point to The Creator.This would answer your question: "Who?" My favorite line: "Who filled the lungs for a new birth's."
Comment Written 12-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
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amarherig14,I apologize for just responding to this exceptional review. I am truly honored and humbled, thank you ever so much... jls
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You are welcome,jls. No need to apologize, I understand. Blessings,Margie.
Comment from rushingwater
This was beautiful and the picture well suited your words. I like the repeated word WHO.. it makes us think as we read through your quatrains. You painted some wonderful images with this. Well done.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
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This was beautiful and the picture well suited your words. I like the repeated word WHO.. it makes us think as we read through your quatrains. You painted some wonderful images with this. Well done.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
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rushinwater, I apologize for just responding to this wonderful review. I am truly honored and humbled, thank you ever so much... jls
Comment from sgalletti
Wonderful quatrains, my friend! Nice flow without a formal metric scheme and good choice of words for the abab rhyme scheme. However, I most appreciated putting this in a questioning format which invites the reader in to think deeply about your excellent questions. Can't help but read this and appreciate the blessings that surround us. Sue
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
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Wonderful quatrains, my friend! Nice flow without a formal metric scheme and good choice of words for the abab rhyme scheme. However, I most appreciated putting this in a questioning format which invites the reader in to think deeply about your excellent questions. Can't help but read this and appreciate the blessings that surround us. Sue
Comment Written 12-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
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Sue, I apologize for just responding to this exceptional review. I am truly honored and humbled, thank you ever so much for your contiued suppoet of my work. jimi
Comment from steevie
Its hard to fathom that there are people in this world who do not believe in a Wonderful Creator.
Your poem was excellent and written with such skill and amazement, touching on aspects of life that we can easily forget at times. Thank you for sharing this glimpse of your thoughts with us.
a fine write, J
steve
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
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Its hard to fathom that there are people in this world who do not believe in a Wonderful Creator.
Your poem was excellent and written with such skill and amazement, touching on aspects of life that we can easily forget at times. Thank you for sharing this glimpse of your thoughts with us.
a fine write, J
steve
Comment Written 12-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
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Steevie, This was such a pleasant surprise!! But first let me say,I apologize for just responding to this wonderful review. I am truly honored and humbled, thank you ever so much... jimi
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you're very welcome, Jimi
steve
Comment from Maustin
"Who gave me the insight to share this with you
It's neither a riddle, nor a puzzle, to answer: Who?"
Wow, what an extremely moving work you painted here. I love each of your introductions. So moving in so many ways. God is beyond Amazing. Your work is so impactful on various levels. Great write. Recommended read. A virtual 100*****!!!!
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
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"Who gave me the insight to share this with you
It's neither a riddle, nor a puzzle, to answer: Who?"
Wow, what an extremely moving work you painted here. I love each of your introductions. So moving in so many ways. God is beyond Amazing. Your work is so impactful on various levels. Great write. Recommended read. A virtual 100*****!!!!
Comment Written 12-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2012
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Maustin, oh my, I apologize for just responding to this exceptional review. I am truly honored and humbled, thank you ever, ever so much!!!. jls
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Jl you are so welcome. No worries...:)
