I Took A Chance
Love Poem Poetry Contest Submission67 total reviews
Comment from MAMONIA
Congratulations! This is a most deserving win.
This love poem expresses what many may feel when
they let go and let love in.
It flows so easily and reflects what I know in my
heart to be true love. You took a chance and loved and
lived. Absolutely stunning.
Best of luck always.
Marie
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2012
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Congratulations! This is a most deserving win.
This love poem expresses what many may feel when
they let go and let love in.
It flows so easily and reflects what I know in my
heart to be true love. You took a chance and loved and
lived. Absolutely stunning.
Best of luck always.
Marie
Comment Written 15-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2012
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Thanks so much Marie, for the congratulations and your words...I appreciate them...blessings.
Comment from Adri7enne
Beautiful! A worthy winner. I love the simplicity of the ideas, the unadorned focus of the message. I love how you wrote:"Afraid of love and life", and ended with:"Took a chance and loved. Took a chance and lived." Congratulations on a good win.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2012
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Beautiful! A worthy winner. I love the simplicity of the ideas, the unadorned focus of the message. I love how you wrote:"Afraid of love and life", and ended with:"Took a chance and loved. Took a chance and lived." Congratulations on a good win.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2012
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Thanks so much Adri7enne, for the six stars and your words...I truly appreciate them...blessings.
Comment from marilyo
Congratulations! I love your poem because I did just that - I took a chance. Your short lines all helped bring a unified feeling of joy that permeated the poem. Lovely !
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2012
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Congratulations! I love your poem because I did just that - I took a chance. Your short lines all helped bring a unified feeling of joy that permeated the poem. Lovely !
Comment Written 15-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2012
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Thank you so much marilyo, for your words. That is what life is all about...taking chances. Blessings to you and yours.
Comment from Contests
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2012
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 A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry. |
Comment Written 15-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2012
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Thank you for choosing my poem. I don`t know what to say except I am honoured.
Comment from smudge
This poem is love like a light leading out of a tunnel as illustrated in the artwork. I am not sure I like the black and white presentation.
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This poem is love like a light leading out of a tunnel as illustrated in the artwork. I am not sure I like the black and white presentation.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2012
Comment from Mary Ann MCPhedran
a lovely well written poem it has imagery and needs no edit. The poem cought my interestm and held it. The words are bautiful. A great little poem.
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a lovely well written poem it has imagery and needs no edit. The poem cought my interestm and held it. The words are bautiful. A great little poem.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2012
Comment from xxjsfuncxxxity
Great short poem. Very well-written. Especially liked the last few lines. Thanks for sharing this one here, and thanks too for the generous 8 points and 1.00 member dollars to line the old fs coffers...
cheers
js
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Great short poem. Very well-written. Especially liked the last few lines. Thanks for sharing this one here, and thanks too for the generous 8 points and 1.00 member dollars to line the old fs coffers...
cheers
js
Comment Written 10-Aug-2012
Comment from cabinwriter
Your poem is lyrical and compelling, taking the reader from despair to joy with very few words.
The only comment I could make would be to poetic devices that really show the reader how you felt rather than just telling what emotions you felt.
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Your poem is lyrical and compelling, taking the reader from despair to joy with very few words.
The only comment I could make would be to poetic devices that really show the reader how you felt rather than just telling what emotions you felt.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2012
Comment from jaeladarling
I love how this poem progressed, ending with taking a chance and living. Very beautifully written; a poem to touch the heart for sure. :) Thanks for sharing!
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I love how this poem progressed, ending with taking a chance and living. Very beautifully written; a poem to touch the heart for sure. :) Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 09-Aug-2012
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your sweet poem effectively states the range of powers love has: When it becomes a one-way street, it can break and dehumanize us; as a two-way street, it makes life worth living.
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Your sweet poem effectively states the range of powers love has: When it becomes a one-way street, it can break and dehumanize us; as a two-way street, it makes life worth living.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2012
