Comment from Hollyhock

Excellent

Amusing, and you use all the words required by the contest.
I do wonder if you would be able to remember everything so clearly if you had so much to drink?
Neat ending, it was all planned, the perfect opportunity to get yourself off the hook!
Unless I'm missing something due to being UK oriented, I did loose you a bit with,
"We all loose stool"? Sorry if I'm just being thick.
Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2012

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2012

Holly, It is a slurred verbalization of 'We all lose too.' Loose stool is a term for diarhea. Thanks for reviewing.

reply by Hollyhock on 03-Aug-2012

thanks for the explanation, I did recognise "loose stool" for what it was but couldn't quite hear what it should be! Sorry to be dense.

Comment from purrfect tale

Excellent

Laughter myself silly when I read that last line and discovered it was a carefully constructed plan. That's what I call conflict resolution!

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2012

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2012

Thank you for your kind review.

Comment from gifted$1

Excellent

Very well played by the reluctant fiancee. He can blame it on the drink later. But it appears that the girl wasn't all that committed either. Nicely done in this short piece.

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 Comment Written 03-Aug-2012

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2012

Christine, Thank you for your kind and discerning review.

Comment from ScarletClearwater

Excellent

This is great. So losing her was the plan all along. Well I'd say you ruined the wedding toast thought. Embarrassing. Great job with the prompt.

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 Comment Written 03-Aug-2012

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2012

Thank you for your kind review.