Comment from ernesto escarro

Excellent

Storm Brewing Free Verse

Barren land explored with diminishing
flow of resources causing discharges
of electrical energy.
Man wishing down unto his prayer
for the storm to come not for destruction
but to suffice the area of the land to maintain breathe of existence.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2012

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2012

Thank you for reviewing.

reply by ernesto escarro on 02-Aug-2012

Thanks then and you are welcome. God bless.

Comment from Heaven Bound

Excellent

Really, really nice. I like this one a lot. I'm so impressed with all the rich words you included in this. Excellent color combination as well.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2012

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2012

Thank you for the great review. I liked the color combination too.

Comment from Maustin

Excellent

"Thirsting river beds lay languid
denude of energy,
thermal tarpaulins
beseeching the brewing storm"
Powerful imagery you painted in this work. I love these lines above. Good work. I enjoyed. Good photo choice indeed.

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 Comment Written 02-Aug-2012

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2012

Thank you for the detailed review.

reply by Maustin on 02-Aug-2012

So welcome

Comment from Opal H.

Excellent

Wow...this poem is packed with amazing imagery. The way things have been described, it has the necessary feel of a storm. Even the color scheme goes well with it. Good work.

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 Comment Written 02-Aug-2012

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2012

Thanks so much for the great review.