Beautiful Son
A mothers look at her son27 total reviews
Comment from kra-z-ka-z
And you succeeded! This poem says what (ALMOST) every mother feels. Watching a child, specifically a son, grow into an adult is both joyful and sad...
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2012
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And you succeeded! This poem says what (ALMOST) every mother feels. Watching a child, specifically a son, grow into an adult is both joyful and sad...
Comment Written 31-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2012
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Thank you for such a great review! Happi
Comment from JennaG
I truly enjoyed your poem. In very few words, you were able to tell us so much about your son and also let us see how much you've cherished watching him grow. I have a 5 year old son and I am constantly amazed at how fast it's all going by. Your poem reminds me to cherish every moment. This was lovely. Thank you for sharing. :)
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2012
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I truly enjoyed your poem. In very few words, you were able to tell us so much about your son and also let us see how much you've cherished watching him grow. I have a 5 year old son and I am constantly amazed at how fast it's all going by. Your poem reminds me to cherish every moment. This was lovely. Thank you for sharing. :)
Comment Written 31-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2012
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Than you so much! I appreciate your reading and reviewing my poem! Happi
Comment from Starlit Ink
I have a son who is grown now, and it was amazing to watch him grow from a baby to a tall man. When this is read, the reader thinks of a son. I liked the imagery of a kind man growing tall. It's an enjoyable piece that brings back memories.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2012
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I have a son who is grown now, and it was amazing to watch him grow from a baby to a tall man. When this is read, the reader thinks of a son. I liked the imagery of a kind man growing tall. It's an enjoyable piece that brings back memories.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2012
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Thank you have a great evening! Happi
Comment from strandloper
Spot on with both the syllable count as well as the mother pride! A beautiful theme indeed. How wonderful the way in which our children change us to become the caring and nurturing human beings we were meant to be. And what a very special bond there is between a mother and her son. How blessed you are to bond in such a special way! Well done with your lovely poem! Warm regards, Stella
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2012
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Spot on with both the syllable count as well as the mother pride! A beautiful theme indeed. How wonderful the way in which our children change us to become the caring and nurturing human beings we were meant to be. And what a very special bond there is between a mother and her son. How blessed you are to bond in such a special way! Well done with your lovely poem! Warm regards, Stella
Comment Written 31-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2012
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Thank you Stella! I appreciate this so much! Happi
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Thank you Stella! I appreciate this so much! Happi
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made good use of every syllable to express your wise hopes for your son to be--not rich and powerful, but kind and humble. very good
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2012
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You have made good use of every syllable to express your wise hopes for your son to be--not rich and powerful, but kind and humble. very good
Comment Written 31-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2012
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Yes this is so true..Thank you for this review..Happi
Comment from dmt1967
This is a beautiful poem and your son sounds like an angle I can see some girls going to be very lucky to have him one day thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2012
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This is a beautiful poem and your son sounds like an angle I can see some girls going to be very lucky to have him one day thank you for sharing
Comment Written 31-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2012
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You are very sweet..Thank you so much for this kind review..Happi
Comment from Opal H.
I love the way you've described your son by describing how he has grown up and life has flown so fast, then describing his physical charateristics as well as good personality. Great work.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2012
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I love the way you've described your son by describing how he has grown up and life has flown so fast, then describing his physical charateristics as well as good personality. Great work.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2012
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem..Happi
Comment from hollyinvesuvianite
This is a beautiful tribute to your son. Such few, but concise words are chosen to express his being and how much he means to you. Wonderful work, here. Holly
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2012
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This is a beautiful tribute to your son. Such few, but concise words are chosen to express his being and how much he means to you. Wonderful work, here. Holly
Comment Written 31-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2012
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Thanks again Holly, A huge thank you for the stars and have a good week!!Happi
Comment from gazzagodbod
you did just tat so much vision from so few words and yes its the same with my daughter though not the deep voice lol thanks xxgazzax
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2012
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you did just tat so much vision from so few words and yes its the same with my daughter though not the deep voice lol thanks xxgazzax
Comment Written 30-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2012
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Thank you for such a great review! Happi
Comment from Liilia
Life moves so swiftly,
growing tall, speaking deeply,
Humble,kind, my son.
This Haiku touches me deeply. I had a son like that. Your poem, in a few chosen words, bespeaks of the miracle and also incomprehension of life - so swift. One minute, he's a baby, the next, tall, voice of a man. When I read this poem, my son, your son, I suppose every mother's son is captured here. Thank you for sharing this 'aha' moment, as they define a true Haiku. Blessings, Liilia
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2012
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Life moves so swiftly,
growing tall, speaking deeply,
Humble,kind, my son.
This Haiku touches me deeply. I had a son like that. Your poem, in a few chosen words, bespeaks of the miracle and also incomprehension of life - so swift. One minute, he's a baby, the next, tall, voice of a man. When I read this poem, my son, your son, I suppose every mother's son is captured here. Thank you for sharing this 'aha' moment, as they define a true Haiku. Blessings, Liilia
Comment Written 30-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2012
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Thank you so much for your review..I wrote this about my son but hoped as you said it could touch all Moms..I am glad you liked this and you said you had a son like this.I am so sorry. I dont want to pry I just wanted to say that if he is no longer with you here on Earth, I am sorry. I cannot imagine that. Happi
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You are welcome. Yes, my son is in Heaven but God gives me strength to bear this earthly loss. Liilia
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I am so sorry Liilia! I will keep you in my prayers each day..Being a Mom myself I know that must be hard..Anytime you need a friend just write..Happi
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Thank you Happi, I appreciate your prayers and your concern. Liilia
