Comment from Louanne

Excellent

Believe and you can have everything you want.
I am a great believer in belief.
We don't believe enough.
The Lord said that if we had faith,
we could move mountains,
but we don't believe it.
Why not?
This poem talks about reality.
Fantasies and dreaming are fine.
But we live in the real world,

Nicely done, Nice illustration, too.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2005

Comment from TKField

Good

Pretty, but not one of your stronger efforts. I found the beats a little off.

Ex:
an empty promise will not hold true,
when in the end don't see you through.

This is a bit fuzzy, I wasn't clear on the meaning. Very ethereal though.

I thought this started strong and then got all squishy at the end. A good poem that I think you should re-write.

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 Comment Written 08-Mar-2005

Comment from Elizabeth Clark

Excellent

Poems with the mystical aspects make me all warm inside. I love the magic that fairies share and the unsuspecting treasures that lie within the rainbows. Nice job , Mary

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2005

Comment from Wendyanne

Excellent

This is truly beautiful. You have used some wonderful imagery to convey your feelings to the reader. The picture you have used seems to tie in with your words. Well done.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2005

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

"Believe in possibilities,
in true love, and passion's ease,
in faith that stands the test of time "

great message!
beautiful pic and colors too!
goes great together!

nicely done
thanx for sharing :)

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2005

Comment from tinker067

Excellent

I loved it. The picture is absolutely incredible and works so well with the poem. I can't find anything I didn't like..
......Very well done.

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 Comment Written 08-Mar-2005