Deep South
History to present, the South has made changes15 total reviews
Comment from desirm
For this story or a book chapter,I really like it because each word i read seem believable for me and it is also very interested to read it and the structure is really good and also i say the character seem believable for me.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2012
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For this story or a book chapter,I really like it because each word i read seem believable for me and it is also very interested to read it and the structure is really good and also i say the character seem believable for me.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2012
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Thank you for a wonderful review. I grew up there and when I am in Alabama it is hard to leave. The air smells like what I described. Everyone should go in their lifetime. Happi
Comment from burton.0115
This is a lovely descriptive poem and I can picture the scene well.
Talking of pictures, it's a pity you haven't got one to enhance the words.
I think there is a lovely flow to this poem.
Well done.
Mary
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2012
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This is a lovely descriptive poem and I can picture the scene well.
Talking of pictures, it's a pity you haven't got one to enhance the words.
I think there is a lovely flow to this poem.
Well done.
Mary
Comment Written 29-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2012
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Thank you for the suggestion. I found a picture and I hope you like it. Happi
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Love it!
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Good, thank you again for the suggestion! Happi
Comment from Ekim777
I like your natural approach to the Deep South. My understanding of it comes through the pen of William Faulkner and Tennessee Williams; not a complete picture. I can see your interest in my bushveld poem. As much as I love Africa, my its history, half buried in the old tired soils, is fragmented and unreal. You cannot write much without bringing the past to life. "The deep South has a face of lost times..." Ekim777
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2012
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I like your natural approach to the Deep South. My understanding of it comes through the pen of William Faulkner and Tennessee Williams; not a complete picture. I can see your interest in my bushveld poem. As much as I love Africa, my its history, half buried in the old tired soils, is fragmented and unreal. You cannot write much without bringing the past to life. "The deep South has a face of lost times..." Ekim777
Comment Written 29-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2012
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review. The Deep South has a lot of bones. I cannot write about it without adding these things. You understand it totally. Happi
Comment from lakeport
Beautiful nature, beautiful expressed story poem,I enjoyed reading it. God bless you. Hugs!lakeport.
P.S. It is hard to read,maybe a brighter color!
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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2012
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Beautiful nature, beautiful expressed story poem,I enjoyed reading it. God bless you. Hugs!lakeport.
P.S. It is hard to read,maybe a brighter color!
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Comment Written 29-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2012
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I will do that! Thank you so much. Happi
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thank you Happi.
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The color changed. I hope it is better.. Happi
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that's nice,thank you.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, happiotter, you did a great job writing this free verse poem about the memories harbored by the hills of the ones who died there. great imagery. i would suggest making the words darker. hard to read against a light background
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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2012
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this is very well written, happiotter, you did a great job writing this free verse poem about the memories harbored by the hills of the ones who died there. great imagery. i would suggest making the words darker. hard to read against a light background
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Comment Written 29-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2012
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I will defiantly make it easier to see. Thank you for the review. Happi
