The Heir Apparent
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Mom drops a Bombshell"A family learns their father is a serial killer
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Comment from c_lucas
It good to get back to James, again. This is very wel written with a smooth flow of words, making for an interesting read. Good job.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2012
It good to get back to James, again. This is very wel written with a smooth flow of words, making for an interesting read. Good job.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2012
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I am pleased you continue to find this interesting. I have been away for so long I actually had to reread it just to remember what was going on...lol
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You're welcome, Sasha. Charlie
Comment from adewpearl
It was only nine-thirty, and - add comma
Basically, I'm waiting for new chapters to really comment. I've read these before and can't remember well enough what has been changed :-)
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2012
It was only nine-thirty, and - add comma
Basically, I'm waiting for new chapters to really comment. I've read these before and can't remember well enough what has been changed :-)
Comment Written 02-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2012
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Sadly, I've made so many changes, even I don't remember.
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Sasha,
I think it is a good idea that someone talks to the press. People need to know that they are sorry for what happened and that they understand their grief. I am wondering just what James will say. Well done.....blessings, chey
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2012
Hi Sasha,
I think it is a good idea that someone talks to the press. People need to know that they are sorry for what happened and that they understand their grief. I am wondering just what James will say. Well done.....blessings, chey
Comment Written 02-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2012
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I agree. Not speaking leaves the public wondering what they knew and what they didn't know.
Comment from LadyTreana
I enjoyed reading this chapter. It pulled me In wanting to know more about this case. Very good writing...I will be reading more.
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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2012
I enjoyed reading this chapter. It pulled me In wanting to know more about this case. Very good writing...I will be reading more.
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Comment Written 02-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2012
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Thank you very much. I am so pleased you find this interesting.
Comment from RazberryBullet
Mom is quite a sensible woman--let it all out and (hopefully)be done with it.
James comes across as a sensitive young man confronted by a horrible situation.
Well done!
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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2012
Mom is quite a sensible woman--let it all out and (hopefully)be done with it.
James comes across as a sensitive young man confronted by a horrible situation.
Well done!
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Comment Written 02-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2012
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Yes, it is a situation most of us cannot fathom ever having to face. I am pleased you liked this one.