Reflections For The New Day
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Comment from Crimson Steel
a well written poem here. Has a nice calm and peaceful sense to it which I enjoy. I like the last 4 stanzas I think they are called on this piece. Good job.
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a well written poem here. Has a nice calm and peaceful sense to it which I enjoy. I like the last 4 stanzas I think they are called on this piece. Good job.
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Comment Written 26-Feb-2005
Comment from shelley kaye
[heavenly's ] <- did you mean heaven's ?
doesnt sound right with heavenly :P
otherwise this was great!
"Relax for a moment
and listen"
great message!
nicely done
thanx for sharing :)
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[heavenly's ] <- did you mean heaven's ?
doesnt sound right with heavenly :P
otherwise this was great!
"Relax for a moment
and listen"
great message!
nicely done
thanx for sharing :)
Comment Written 26-Feb-2005
Comment from jlgtiger
Nice work, Thru.....while I seldom comment of the artwork, this one exactly fits your verse.
Your text shows much emotion and longing, and this is conveyed to the reader. Your work flows smoothly and again leads this reader to pause and listen more often to the things of nature that can say so much....but, we first have to be in tune to hear....thanks for the write.....jlgtiger
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Nice work, Thru.....while I seldom comment of the artwork, this one exactly fits your verse.
Your text shows much emotion and longing, and this is conveyed to the reader. Your work flows smoothly and again leads this reader to pause and listen more often to the things of nature that can say so much....but, we first have to be in tune to hear....thanks for the write.....jlgtiger
Comment Written 26-Feb-2005
Comment from Kingsland
heavenlies>heavenly
the word you presented does not exist
but the poem is still good enough for five stars
...................John
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heavenlies>heavenly
the word you presented does not exist
but the poem is still good enough for five stars
...................John
Comment Written 26-Feb-2005
Comment from Dreamdancer
Hello, This poem is so beautiful-and in so few words packs an emotional punch. It flows so warmly through ones mind and it catches the senses, Thank you for sharing!
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Hello, This poem is so beautiful-and in so few words packs an emotional punch. It flows so warmly through ones mind and it catches the senses, Thank you for sharing!
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Comment Written 26-Feb-2005
