Wake Up Sleepy Head
short free verse15 total reviews
Comment from purrfect tale
I was really in the mood for something light hearted that would make me smile, and this fit the bill. It had me smiling from beginning to end.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2012
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I was really in the mood for something light hearted that would make me smile, and this fit the bill. It had me smiling from beginning to end.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2012
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Thank you for taking the time to review my free verse poem.
Comment from Carole Rosa
To the author of Wake Up Sleepy Head. My 6 year old grandson sleeps like a rock. One morning he said to me, very sweetly with his eyes still closed, "Go away grandma, I'm not done sleeping yet!" Your poem is a gentle little poem with a flare of humor about feathers and giggles. Nicely done. Carole
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2012
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To the author of Wake Up Sleepy Head. My 6 year old grandson sleeps like a rock. One morning he said to me, very sweetly with his eyes still closed, "Go away grandma, I'm not done sleeping yet!" Your poem is a gentle little poem with a flare of humor about feathers and giggles. Nicely done. Carole
Comment Written 15-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2012
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Thank you for taking the time to review my free verse poem.
Comment from lnoreika
Well I wish I had your little angel! But, every morning I always thank God for another day. I believe that we are surrounded by our loved ones who have passed, and wish the best for us. I am jealous, because they have wings!
Nice poem!
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2012
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Well I wish I had your little angel! But, every morning I always thank God for another day. I believe that we are surrounded by our loved ones who have passed, and wish the best for us. I am jealous, because they have wings!
Nice poem!
Comment Written 14-Jun-2012
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Thank you for taking the time to review my free verse poem.
Comment from koolaid228
this is a very cute poem, it makes me smile,to hear an angell giggle would be wonderful,and probly rare,thank you for sharing. koolaid
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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2012
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this is a very cute poem, it makes me smile,to hear an angell giggle would be wonderful,and probly rare,thank you for sharing. koolaid
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Comment Written 14-Jun-2012
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Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes I really like this it read very smoothly through the whole work very well written and presented good luck in the contest regards Jill
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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2012
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Yes I really like this it read very smoothly through the whole work very well written and presented good luck in the contest regards Jill
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Comment Written 14-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2012
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Thank you for taking the time to review my free verse poem.