Gima The Beginning
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Comment from InterestingRon
Hi ellen
WOW! I love a good battle - and you certainly didn't pull any punches (if you'll excuse the pun).
Okay, no surprise that Gima would be rescued - but you kept the tension high throughout.
You're in luck - I actually had a six left for once.
Ron xox
reply by the author on 13-May-2012
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Hi ellen
WOW! I love a good battle - and you certainly didn't pull any punches (if you'll excuse the pun).
Okay, no surprise that Gima would be rescued - but you kept the tension high throughout.
You're in luck - I actually had a six left for once.
Ron xox
Comment Written 13-May-2012
reply by the author on 13-May-2012
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Thank you, Ron for enjoying the fight. I'd never written one before. I'm glad you had a six left, too. I'm full up this week for a change, too. :) ellen
Comment from Janie King
Cop out time again..mom's not feeling her best today..all my brothers, sister and their families, grandkids and great grandkids will be here June 15th for three days with mom..it should b grand. God bless.
reply by the author on 13-May-2012
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Cop out time again..mom's not feeling her best today..all my brothers, sister and their families, grandkids and great grandkids will be here June 15th for three days with mom..it should b grand. God bless.
Comment Written 13-May-2012
reply by the author on 13-May-2012
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Those family times are the best, aren't they? Your mom is blessed to have so many to visit her. Just knowing that they are coming should perk up her spirits. :) I love these little messages that we have going, Janie. Take care. Happy Mother's Day. :) ellen
Comment from Writingfundimension
Wow Ellen! This was one heckuva fight scene. Your descriptions are just brilliant, bringing the whole bloody thing to life. And Gima is rescued!! Your superb storytelling skills are in full force here, my friend. This chapter absolutely deserves a six which I am not being allowed yet. Bravo. Hugs, Bev
reply by the author on 13-May-2012
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Wow Ellen! This was one heckuva fight scene. Your descriptions are just brilliant, bringing the whole bloody thing to life. And Gima is rescued!! Your superb storytelling skills are in full force here, my friend. This chapter absolutely deserves a six which I am not being allowed yet. Bravo. Hugs, Bev
Comment Written 13-May-2012
reply by the author on 13-May-2012
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Thank you, Bev for you glowing comments and virtual six. I have such a wonderful group of readers with only a limited number of sixes so the virtual ones are dear to my heart as well. Your Bravo and Hugs are warmly appreciated. I have to top this in the finale. Whew! Keep your fingers crossed for me. LOL :) e
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I will, Ellen, but you've already brought this full circle to the great enjoyment of your book's fans like me. Look forward to your finale, my friend. Love, Bev
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Hallelujah - Trell has found Gima.
A great fight scene you've conjured
up, Ellen. Lots of bloody action.
intestines and liver. Then falls dead. - this needs to be a run-on sentence..... and liver, then falls dead.
Deserving of a six, my friend.
Margaret
reply by the author on 13-May-2012
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Hallelujah - Trell has found Gima.
A great fight scene you've conjured
up, Ellen. Lots of bloody action.
intestines and liver. Then falls dead. - this needs to be a run-on sentence..... and liver, then falls dead.
Deserving of a six, my friend.
Margaret
Comment Written 13-May-2012
reply by the author on 13-May-2012
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Thank you, Margaret. I'm astonished, only one boo-boo. A six from you is beyond belief for a beginner like me. Thank you again.:) ellen x
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you're no beginner, girl.. you're a real natural. I was going to add something cheeky, but won't spoil it. M
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How sweet, Margaret. You can be cheeky anytime. Was it funny? Curious antenna is up. LOL:) e xx
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Just love to toment you... you're a natural.. natural what, I'm not sure.... well, I get teased all the time.. don't know where those sons of mine get it from. Hugs. M
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Torment away. LOL That sounds like something my son would say, too. LOL :) e xx
Comment from Gungalo
Wow girl that was sure some fight scene. What fight as they all fall down from herbal concoctions? You are very good and you write as well as you speak. And Trell has found Gima.
reply by the author on 13-May-2012
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Wow girl that was sure some fight scene. What fight as they all fall down from herbal concoctions? You are very good and you write as well as you speak. And Trell has found Gima.
Comment Written 13-May-2012
reply by the author on 13-May-2012
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Thank you, G. You review is great. Yep, they got her. Finally. LOL:) e
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Took 'em long enuff!! LOL. What's it been, a year or more?? LOL.
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She's been missing three months. I had to heal Hunter and Asmel and let Blathen grow up while Trell mourned. We needed Blathen's logic. :)
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Gotcha girl. It seemed longer in the actual story.
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I was slower getting out chapter when the book first started. It has been quite a while getting it finished. The next one will be faster, I promise. LOL I think I have the most patient readers in the world. Waiting a week for a chapter is very hard and then to remember it all, even harder. Thank you, G for hanging in there with me.:) BD
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It's not hard at all BD. You are good and certainly worth the wait.
Comment from inkedone
Your story is very well put together. It's obvious that a lot of time has gone into this story. Your characters are well developed and the mood of the story is very apparent.
reply by the author on 13-May-2012
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Your story is very well put together. It's obvious that a lot of time has gone into this story. Your characters are well developed and the mood of the story is very apparent.
Comment Written 13-May-2012
reply by the author on 13-May-2012
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Thank you, inkedone for your fine review. I tried. All new for me to try a fight scene. :) e
Comment from Sarah_Goldwell
This is a very well written chapter. Although it is not my preferred genre, I can see a lot of thought and effort has gone in to this work.
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reply by the author on 13-May-2012
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This is a very well written chapter. Although it is not my preferred genre, I can see a lot of thought and effort has gone in to this work.
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Comment Written 13-May-2012
reply by the author on 13-May-2012
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Thank you, Sarah for seeing that a lot of thought and work went into this chapter. I do appreciate your review, especially since it is outside of your genre preference.:) barking dog
Comment from c_lucas
A successful surprised attack completed. Now back to the tunnels and freedom. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
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A successful surprised attack completed. Now back to the tunnels and freedom. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
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Comment Written 13-May-2012
reply by the author on 13-May-2012
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Thank you, Charlie. Yes, back to the tunnels, but we're not done yet. hee-hee.:) ellen
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You're welcome. Waiting for more. Charlie