Dracula
A Minute poem28 total reviews
Comment from Janie King
Dracula..what a thought...this is well-written...kind of a subject I would have never considered writing about..picture is perfect for the theme. God bless.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2012
Dracula..what a thought...this is well-written...kind of a subject I would have never considered writing about..picture is perfect for the theme. God bless.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2012
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Thanks so much for your time and lovely review. Have a nice Sunday and take care, Ine. No I don't choose this very often, but try to vary as much as I can.
Comment from Matoshka
Ohhhhh. You made Dracula sound so romantic and the lady that he loved to be his for all time. I loved your picture and your words. Blessings Ine.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
Ohhhhh. You made Dracula sound so romantic and the lady that he loved to be his for all time. I loved your picture and your words. Blessings Ine.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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Thanks so much for your time and lovely review. Have a nice Sunday and take care, Ine
Comment from missy98writer
Ina,
Dracula sucks, pun intended. Your Minuet poem is astutely written with superb imagery. There is a strong rhythmic cadence to your Minuet style poem. Your Minuet is in very fine form with great rhyme and meter. You used very good metaphor usage and excellent alliteration usage with the S wordd in your poem. I like your third stanza the best:
"Accept my kiss, then come with me
Stay young, be free
Though still a slave -
To blood, and grave."
Comments: I like the originality of using a Minuet with iambic rhythmic usage. I'd recommend your delightful Minuete poem to other readers. Awesome day to you & that's my 2 cents. Oops...The art work is priceless you used. A tornado hit in west Oklahoma last night killing five people in Woodward, Oklahoma. Let's pray for those who lost loved ones & lost their homes.
Melissa.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
Ina,
Dracula sucks, pun intended. Your Minuet poem is astutely written with superb imagery. There is a strong rhythmic cadence to your Minuet style poem. Your Minuet is in very fine form with great rhyme and meter. You used very good metaphor usage and excellent alliteration usage with the S wordd in your poem. I like your third stanza the best:
"Accept my kiss, then come with me
Stay young, be free
Though still a slave -
To blood, and grave."
Comments: I like the originality of using a Minuet with iambic rhythmic usage. I'd recommend your delightful Minuete poem to other readers. Awesome day to you & that's my 2 cents. Oops...The art work is priceless you used. A tornado hit in west Oklahoma last night killing five people in Woodward, Oklahoma. Let's pray for those who lost loved ones & lost their homes.
Melissa.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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Thanks so much for your time and lovely review. Have a nice Sunday and take care, Ine. LOL. thanks for recommending. Ine
Comment from LAFraser
I really like this poem. I've no clue of meter or couplets, only what I like. :) I like the art you've chosen to display your work. My favorite lines are the first stanza. :)
Thank you for posting.
~Eilish
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
I really like this poem. I've no clue of meter or couplets, only what I like. :) I like the art you've chosen to display your work. My favorite lines are the first stanza. :)
Thank you for posting.
~Eilish
Comment Written 15-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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Thanks so much for your time and lovely review. Have a nice Sunday and take care, Ine
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You're welcome. :)
~Eilish
Comment from percival86jack
You're scaring the poop out of me, my dear Robina! Where's my blankie? LOL This one's quite different for you... hugs, Jack xxxxxxx
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
You're scaring the poop out of me, my dear Robina! Where's my blankie? LOL This one's quite different for you... hugs, Jack xxxxxxx
Comment Written 15-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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Thanks so much for your time and lovely review. Have a nice Sunday and take care, Ine. Vary a bit.
Comment from Alan K Pease
Your minute poem of sixty syllables pattered in 8/4/4/4 puts you back ito the groove. Dracula seems to have no remorse for a woman to come to him on her own volition. Slave to blood and grave it is,
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
Your minute poem of sixty syllables pattered in 8/4/4/4 puts you back ito the groove. Dracula seems to have no remorse for a woman to come to him on her own volition. Slave to blood and grave it is,
Comment Written 15-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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Thanks so much for your time and lovely review. Have a nice Sunday and take care, Ine
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Not as well versed on this technical style or form. But you penned it well when I see what the form is supposed to hold.
"Accept my kiss, then come with me
Stay young, be free
Though still a slave -
To blood, and grave" // This was a powerful descriptive stanza. Penned well, and it made me shiver, so you got the emotion of emptiness/loss/death within it.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
Not as well versed on this technical style or form. But you penned it well when I see what the form is supposed to hold.
"Accept my kiss, then come with me
Stay young, be free
Though still a slave -
To blood, and grave" // This was a powerful descriptive stanza. Penned well, and it made me shiver, so you got the emotion of emptiness/loss/death within it.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
Comment Written 15-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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Thanks so much for your time and lovely review. Have a nice Sunday and take care, Ine. I thought you knew them all, but it was right on form.
Comment from c_lucas
I have heard it said that Dracula was the grandfather of the vampiric world. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
I have heard it said that Dracula was the grandfather of the vampiric world. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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Thanks so much for your time and lovely review. Have a nice Sunday and take care, Ine
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You're welcome, Ine. Charlie
Comment from N.K. Wagner
Creepy picture, Ine. Can you believe we actually paid money to watch that stuff? An excellent minute poem makes a perfect caption and the picture a perfect illustration of your poem. Well done. :) Nancy
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
Creepy picture, Ine. Can you believe we actually paid money to watch that stuff? An excellent minute poem makes a perfect caption and the picture a perfect illustration of your poem. Well done. :) Nancy
Comment Written 15-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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Thanks so much for your time and lovely review. Have a nice Sunday and take care, Ine. Thanks Nancy.
Comment from elgone
This was an entertaining piece. I used to love watching Bella La Gossi, Lon Chaney etc in the B&W horror classics. About the only reason I miss having a TV is there used to be Sunday afternoon matinee's of old movies.
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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
This was an entertaining piece. I used to love watching Bella La Gossi, Lon Chaney etc in the B&W horror classics. About the only reason I miss having a TV is there used to be Sunday afternoon matinee's of old movies.
E
Comment Written 15-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2012
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Thanks so much for your time and lovely review. Have a nice Sunday and take care, Ine. Do you not want a TV or is money the issue?
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My TV broke in 2007, I just never replaced it. At the time we couldn't afford the expense of cable and my kids preferred the Internet over TV. Everyone actually got used to not watching TV. I really don't miss it often. I used to watch news a lot and it depressed me. I'm better off without it.
E
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The internet overtook it. We watch the news and some films.
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I foresee TV evolving into something very different than it was in the past of even what it is now. I guess maybe my family and I were the first to realize life without TV isn't so bad.
E