The Heir Apparent
Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "Grandmother Meets Angela"A family learns their father is a serial killer
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Comment from Margaret Snowdon
What a sad, sad life the poor
Grandmother lived... and now,
to be amongst her family must
be a Godsend... and yet she has
surgery to face.
A couple of minor things...
and said,"I think - space after comma
and said,"I'll explain - and here
orthopedic - orthopaedic
dietitian - dietician
Margaret
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2012
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What a sad, sad life the poor
Grandmother lived... and now,
to be amongst her family must
be a Godsend... and yet she has
surgery to face.
A couple of minor things...
and said,"I think - space after comma
and said,"I'll explain - and here
orthopedic - orthopaedic
dietitian - dietician
Margaret
Comment Written 28-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2012
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Thanks for catching the spags. I am pleased you liked this chapter.
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Smurph,
I continue to feel sorry for James as he has more on this plate than anyone so young would have to endure. However, he is brave and intelligent and his family depends on him. I am glad James introduced Angela to grandmother and her telling about Marie Anne didn't upset her as much as James thought it would. She is proud of her new hair cut isn't she! Well done....blessings, chey
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2012
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Hi Smurph,
I continue to feel sorry for James as he has more on this plate than anyone so young would have to endure. However, he is brave and intelligent and his family depends on him. I am glad James introduced Angela to grandmother and her telling about Marie Anne didn't upset her as much as James thought it would. She is proud of her new hair cut isn't she! Well done....blessings, chey
Comment Written 28-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2012
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In so many ways Alfina is just a grown up child.
Comment from Joan E.
Along with Angela's attitude, I found it heartwarming that the simple haircut could give such joy to the emotionally impoverished Grandmother. -Joan
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2012
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Along with Angela's attitude, I found it heartwarming that the simple haircut could give such joy to the emotionally impoverished Grandmother. -Joan
Comment Written 28-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2012
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Feeling good about yourself is the first step toward healing. I am so pleased you enjoyed this chapter.
Comment from RebelRose
It is good that Grandmother has a female friend to bond with and learn from. It is so sad that she doesn't even know who God is; hidden from society and reality the way she was. Great chapter.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2012
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It is good that Grandmother has a female friend to bond with and learn from. It is so sad that she doesn't even know who God is; hidden from society and reality the way she was. Great chapter.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2012
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I like that despite being so different they really have a lot in common. Glad you liked this one.
Comment from Halfree
This one dragged a bit but still held my attention. Some very good dialog and the handling of grandmother pretty well done. Am enjoying this story and as I have said I think it is better written that "A Leaf...." Keep at it.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2012
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This one dragged a bit but still held my attention. Some very good dialog and the handling of grandmother pretty well done. Am enjoying this story and as I have said I think it is better written that "A Leaf...." Keep at it.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2012
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Thanks. I know this one is a bit slow but they all can't be dramatic...the reader would get worn out.
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Hell, I enjoyed it slow or not
Comment from Janie King
Well, that went better than one would think..thank God the girls grandmother understood this woman had nothing to do with the death of Marie Anne. Good chapter..I'm anxious to move on. God bless.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2012
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Well, that went better than one would think..thank God the girls grandmother understood this woman had nothing to do with the death of Marie Anne. Good chapter..I'm anxious to move on. God bless.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2012
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They make quite a pair, don't they. Both strong women in their own different ways.
Comment from Belinda
Hi, Sasha, this time your chapter is quite light and easier to follow...:) I'm glad Angela and Alfina become friendly so quickly. Thanks for your author notes, I guess some other forgetful readers like me will find them useful.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2012
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Hi, Sasha, this time your chapter is quite light and easier to follow...:) I'm glad Angela and Alfina become friendly so quickly. Thanks for your author notes, I guess some other forgetful readers like me will find them useful.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2012
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You guys read so many stories and books, I don't know how you keep them all straight. Glad you liked this one.
Comment from cathcartgirl
Smurph, A very interesting chapter in your murder mystery.
Lots of information, but still not enough to know what is goint on. I guess I will have to get the whole book when it is done. Cathcartgirl
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2012
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Smurph, A very interesting chapter in your murder mystery.
Lots of information, but still not enough to know what is goint on. I guess I will have to get the whole book when it is done. Cathcartgirl
Comment Written 27-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2012
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Still lots of missing information to be found. Glad you liked this chapter.
Comment from c_lucas
it looks like Evil Eddy had declared war on your author's nots. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2012
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it looks like Evil Eddy had declared war on your author's nots. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2012
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Thanks, I'll check them out. Glad you liked this one.
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You're welcome, Sasha. Charlie
Comment from LilHippie
Wow! What a great story!! This is the first chapter I am reading, and it does not even matter. It is very good. Of course, there are details I need, will have to go back as soon as I can, but this is very good. I love it. Poor Grandmother!!!! What a shame. Her son is a serial killer. Interesting. Very interesting and completely pulling the reader right into the story.
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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2012
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Wow! What a great story!! This is the first chapter I am reading, and it does not even matter. It is very good. Of course, there are details I need, will have to go back as soon as I can, but this is very good. I love it. Poor Grandmother!!!! What a shame. Her son is a serial killer. Interesting. Very interesting and completely pulling the reader right into the story.
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Comment Written 27-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2012
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I am thrilled you like this, especially without any real background. For what it's worth, it is a fast read and you shouldn't have much trouble catching up.
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Great! Looking forward to it. I am intrigued!
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Don't worry about reviewing each chapter. Most are only worth 2 cents now anyway.
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Oh, no. I love telling people how their work made me feel. I review things all the time that are just 2 cents. Any other way would not be fair.