Serpentine Lights
the Northern Lights22 total reviews
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, helvi, you did a great job writing this nonet poem about the northern light, great imagery presented, i enjoyed reading it and wish you the best of luck in the contest.
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this is very well written, helvi, you did a great job writing this nonet poem about the northern light, great imagery presented, i enjoyed reading it and wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2012
Comment from ameen786
Hello Helvi, my friend, an awesome nonet with rich vocabulary to reflect the beauty of the Northern Lights, superb word choice and phrasing, "When sky waves rule the night,"--good luck!
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Hello Helvi, my friend, an awesome nonet with rich vocabulary to reflect the beauty of the Northern Lights, superb word choice and phrasing, "When sky waves rule the night,"--good luck!
Comment Written 18-Mar-2012
Comment from Rattler
Wow, fantastic. I love it.
I think you have a winner here. Good luck with the contest. I looked into this contest but knew I was no were good enough to even enter.
Thanks for showing off your talents. In the future please notify me of all your contest entries so I can avoid them. LOL
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Wow, fantastic. I love it.
I think you have a winner here. Good luck with the contest. I looked into this contest but knew I was no were good enough to even enter.
Thanks for showing off your talents. In the future please notify me of all your contest entries so I can avoid them. LOL
Comment Written 18-Mar-2012
Comment from nancyjam
I love this beautiful description of
the northern lights in perfect
Nonet form. "Serpentine pathways slide through
the stars" What a beautiful line. I like the alliteration in it.
Best of luck in the contest. Nancy
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I love this beautiful description of
the northern lights in perfect
Nonet form. "Serpentine pathways slide through
the stars" What a beautiful line. I like the alliteration in it.
Best of luck in the contest. Nancy
Comment Written 18-Mar-2012
Comment from pattipac
You chose an excellent picture to segue into your well written nonet poem. Especially liked tour description of Northern Lights as smoothly flowing mystical ribbons flowing through the Milky Way.
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You chose an excellent picture to segue into your well written nonet poem. Especially liked tour description of Northern Lights as smoothly flowing mystical ribbons flowing through the Milky Way.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2012
Comment from G.B. Smith
Hello Sweet Nancy
This is such a well written poem and a magnificent Nonet Poetry Contest contest entry. It flows so well and your words mix well with the solar system
Bear
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2012
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Hello Sweet Nancy
This is such a well written poem and a magnificent Nonet Poetry Contest contest entry. It flows so well and your words mix well with the solar system
Bear
Comment Written 18-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2012
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Awwww! Thank you my friend! I hope my words created something beautiful in your mind's eye! Thank you for the incredible six star review, it means a lot coming from you! :o) Nancy
Comment from Laidy
Lovely. The waves are surely magnificent. I loved reading this poem. The picture you chose went perfectly with your poem
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Lovely. The waves are surely magnificent. I loved reading this poem. The picture you chose went perfectly with your poem
Comment Written 18-Mar-2012
Comment from Christina 201
Thank you for this lovely journey to view the northern lights. The trails of colour are mimicked in the shape of the poem adding an extra dimension to the poem.
Serpentine pathways
slide through the skies
When sky waves
rule the
night. Outstanding verbal picture.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2012
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Thank you for this lovely journey to view the northern lights. The trails of colour are mimicked in the shape of the poem adding an extra dimension to the poem.
Serpentine pathways
slide through the skies
When sky waves
rule the
night. Outstanding verbal picture.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2012
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Hi Christina, I'm glad I could create a journey through the Northern Lights you could enjoy, Thanks you SO much for the six stars you blessed this poem with. I am definitely smilinig! :o) Helvi
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You earned it.
Comment from Glasstruth
A very outer space "Serpentine pathways" you've created in so few words. Love the shape of Nonet poems. You've made yours flow as if it was no problem. Good luck with the contest! Les
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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2012
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A very outer space "Serpentine pathways" you've created in so few words. Love the shape of Nonet poems. You've made yours flow as if it was no problem. Good luck with the contest! Les
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Comment Written 18-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2012
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Hi Les, I had to write this a number of times to get it right! LOL I kept finding more expressive words as I went along...and they had to fit within the poem. I'm glad you liked the end result, I really wanted to create a beautiful picture.. Thank you for the wonderful review. :o) Helvi
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You welcome. I enjoyed it! Les
Comment from Jen Gentry
Perfect perfect nonet, One of my most favorite types of poems, yours is not forced and flows well and leaves me with a sigh of contentment well done
Blessings
Jenny
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2012
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Perfect perfect nonet, One of my most favorite types of poems, yours is not forced and flows well and leaves me with a sigh of contentment well done
Blessings
Jenny
Comment Written 18-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2012
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Hi Jenny, Thank you So much for the incredible six star rating. I'm SO glad you enjoyed this and am honored by your kind remarks. Hugs and Smiles, Helvi