Shortened Life
A lobster fisherman left his family on fathers day14 total reviews
Comment from Gungalo
It is a story that will forever pull at your heartstrings. How can they exist and go forward. Sigh it is really just too much to ask
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2012
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It is a story that will forever pull at your heartstrings. How can they exist and go forward. Sigh it is really just too much to ask
Comment Written 10-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2012
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The strength of people is greatly under rated I think .Thank you for the review.It was a sad day
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Sigh ...
Comment from Shanda17
I like how the poem is short but has so much meaning behind it. There's a sad story behind it and this poem explains it so well.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2012
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I like how the poem is short but has so much meaning behind it. There's a sad story behind it and this poem explains it so well.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2012
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thank you Shanda girly
Comment from Galactia
beautiful written poem, since your editing i havce returned your 5 stars you so deserrved. GL
the boat over turned once more (7)
the salty tears flow (5)
let me know when you have fixed it and i'll recredit you your extra star after work.
Regards
Tia
GL
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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2012
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beautiful written poem, since your editing i havce returned your 5 stars you so deserrved. GL
the boat over turned once more (7)
the salty tears flow (5)
let me know when you have fixed it and i'll recredit you your extra star after work.
Regards
Tia
GL
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Comment Written 07-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2012
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wow got carried away fixed it now
thanks
Comment from Allison78
This is short but tells a story that that is compelling and dramatic and full of emotion. Beautifully written, great job on this!
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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2012
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This is short but tells a story that that is compelling and dramatic and full of emotion. Beautifully written, great job on this!
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Comment Written 07-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2012
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that means a lot to me thank you
