Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

A near by boulder becomes a screen (nearby?)

And everyone lives happily ever after-is this the end? Glad everyone is happy and together now. If this is the end, I do have a couple of suggestions. Hope you are well and have a great day!!! Luv ya, Debbie

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2012

This is no where near the end, Debbie. It's only the middle. I'd be happy to hear your suggestions. Thank you so much, Debbie.:) ellen

Comment from Janie King

Excellent

First sentence we have someone listing for sci-fi horror...I don't like science fiction in it's mildest form so we'll proceed as usual..God bless.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2012

Thank you, Janie. I appreciate your checking in for me. :) ellen

Comment from Chrisfiore

Excellent

Hi bd, You have remained true to your story throughout. I'm glad I am able to encourage you to continue on with it. You seem to be on a roll and for what it is worth I hope you are able to bring this to a suitable conclusion, one that is most satisfactory to you. ;) Chrisfiore

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2012

I am half way through this novel. I know this sounds like a good ending but it's too predictable for me. LOL Thank you for reviewing and encouragement.:) BD

Comment from peggles

Excellent

This was a very fast paced chapter
I liked the shuffling for their fathers attention of the brothers
They are so different with Blathen holding the most danger to his sibling I feel he may destroy him unless Zee is protected by Trell
I enjoyed reading this
Lots of action and excitement

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 Comment Written 19-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2012

There is a bit of rivalry but Blathen also feels he must protect the 'stupid one.' LOL Thank you for checking in, peggles. I do appreciate your point of view on this.:) barking dog

Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

Wow, he dreams deep and decidedly rough. I think that once his father spoke he was reacting to training and promptly awoke. What say you? Amazing recovery by Zee!!

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 Comment Written 19-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2012

Thank you, G for your comments. I alway love to hear what you have to say about this. These brothers are fun.:) BD