Talking
Thoughts and such sorry if it is a bit rocky72 total reviews
Comment from Galactia
great poem of love.
Favourite lines are...
I love this most
the voice calling in the darkness
My song of virtue
the voice of reason
great job
regards
Tia
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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great poem of love.
Favourite lines are...
I love this most
the voice calling in the darkness
My song of virtue
the voice of reason
great job
regards
Tia
Comment Written 15-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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thank you for the kind review glad you liked
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hello Emily. I like the seriousness of this write and the directness of it too. You have an eloquence about your writing that usually comes a lot later in life. Well done. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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Hello Emily. I like the seriousness of this write and the directness of it too. You have an eloquence about your writing that usually comes a lot later in life. Well done. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 15-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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thank you I am very grown up for my age
Comment from robyn corum
It's a special tribute to a good friend and I know that the recipient will be pleased and honored. It's well-written and special. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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It's a special tribute to a good friend and I know that the recipient will be pleased and honored. It's well-written and special. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 15-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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i haven't really told the recipient yet :p
Comment from Carolyn 12
Emily you should have your own spot on FS. I enjoyed reading your poem very much. You have a well rounded approach that not knowing your age shows a nice understanding of emotion. Example being I can see the smile through the words, the voice calling in the distance. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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Emily you should have your own spot on FS. I enjoyed reading your poem very much. You have a well rounded approach that not knowing your age shows a nice understanding of emotion. Example being I can see the smile through the words, the voice calling in the distance. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
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know i only really have short little wisdoms nothing great
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Well, I still think you could have alot of fun and even grow stornger in your writting. Smiles and hugs. Have a reat weekend.
Comment from axelbeariter
If you are not the actual Fan Story member that wrote this great word story, you should join FS as well. Your composition and way with words is as good or better than many of our members. Keep at it. You've got the touch.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2012
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If you are not the actual Fan Story member that wrote this great word story, you should join FS as well. Your composition and way with words is as good or better than many of our members. Keep at it. You've got the touch.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2012
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Thank you I do try
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This poem effectively treats the theme of the power of the voice. You speak movingly of a voice that soothes and reassures. Good job
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2012
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This poem effectively treats the theme of the power of the voice. You speak movingly of a voice that soothes and reassures. Good job
Comment Written 14-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2012
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thank you for the kind review
Comment from kenzi'spoems
"My song of virtue, the voice of reason' wow. what amazing two lines. they could be left alone, just those two for a poem, and posses moving power. amazing job. Thank you for sharing this with me. it is much appreciated. May your light shine all in his time. Blessings
Forever and Truly, Kenzi
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2012
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"My song of virtue, the voice of reason' wow. what amazing two lines. they could be left alone, just those two for a poem, and posses moving power. amazing job. Thank you for sharing this with me. it is much appreciated. May your light shine all in his time. Blessings
Forever and Truly, Kenzi
Comment Written 14-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2012
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Thank you
Comment from artemis53
So lovely! Voices have tremendous power if they're used correctly. They can incite as well as soothe. To add the "voice of reason" to the end is eloquent.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2012
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So lovely! Voices have tremendous power if they're used correctly. They can incite as well as soothe. To add the "voice of reason" to the end is eloquent.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2012
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Thank you
Comment from RUMLOVE1000
Beautiful poem and it seems as tho this person meant a lot to you as well. What a great visual presentation given by you :)
Blessings,
Rumlove1000
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2012
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Beautiful poem and it seems as tho this person meant a lot to you as well. What a great visual presentation given by you :)
Blessings,
Rumlove1000
Comment Written 14-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind reveiw
Comment from Maureen's Pen
A wonderful work with a wispy feeling to it. As if in a dream. Excellent work.
Strong lines and good emotion within the poem.
I enjoyed reading it and thank you for sharing.
Maureen
Edit Check:
"rocks me (slow) to sleep as he tells me a story" // slowly
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2012
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A wonderful work with a wispy feeling to it. As if in a dream. Excellent work.
Strong lines and good emotion within the poem.
I enjoyed reading it and thank you for sharing.
Maureen
Edit Check:
"rocks me (slow) to sleep as he tells me a story" // slowly
Comment Written 14-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2012
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It was meant to have that dream like affect adding to the drama of it thanks for the kind reveiw
