Comment from dhee khaye

Excellent

I'm glad following your chapters. Of all my reviews, your work is one of my favorite. The constructions of sentences in your story are very well finite that made my imaginations play. Thank you for this clear and clean story. Great job. God bless.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2012

You couldn't pay me a greater compliment! Thank you. Alexis x

Comment from AlexAX

Excellent

I think her head is spinning with everything that is going on. She hasn't had much time to think and yes she has everybody depending on her to go through with this now. I think Alan sent it just to say he knows what's going on. Heated seats? could do with that right now lol Another good chapter. Alex :)

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 Comment Written 08-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2012

Thank you, Alex. Yes, heated seats are great at this time of the year, in Scotland too. Many thanks for your review and encouragement. Alexis x

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, alexis, you did a great job writing this chapter of your book where lisa gets a card from alan that causes anger in her because she thinks he's being insensitive and nick buys her a car and driving lessons for her birthday and they celebrate with a legal drink and birthday cake.

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 Comment Written 08-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2012

As usual, you have summed it up so well. Thank you. Alexis x