The Red Dress
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Comment from hellion5
Very well written. The piece is clear and concise, flowing easily from one segment to the other. Lisa's naivete is heartbreakingly typical and you've brought it across brilliantly. I felt every moment of her confusion and panic and pain. Great job--
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2012
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Very well written. The piece is clear and concise, flowing easily from one segment to the other. Lisa's naivete is heartbreakingly typical and you've brought it across brilliantly. I felt every moment of her confusion and panic and pain. Great job--
Comment Written 30-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2012
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Thank you so much for your kind review and observations regarding Lisa's naivety. Sadly she seems unable to do right, for doing wrong a lot of the time. Alexis x
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I know the feeling!
Comment from MumEsGirl
Poor Lisa, she seems to have bad luck every which way. I do hope that she can find work doing something a little less dangerous.
It is certainly time she got a break. Great work yet again
kate
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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2012
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Poor Lisa, she seems to have bad luck every which way. I do hope that she can find work doing something a little less dangerous.
It is certainly time she got a break. Great work yet again
kate
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Comment Written 30-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2012
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Yes, she does seem to invite trouble into her life, whatever she does. Perhaps it will all be better at the boarding school, but there again, perhaps not! Many thanks for your review and continued support. Alexis x