The Red Dress
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Comment from Misrael
I really enjoyed that story and especially that it is from another country makes it even more interesting. Even though I am somewhat old fashioned I still found it good. Good story and good job.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2012
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I really enjoyed that story and especially that it is from another country makes it even more interesting. Even though I am somewhat old fashioned I still found it good. Good story and good job.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2012
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Thank you so much for your lovely review, it is really appreciated. Take care, Alexis x
Comment from AlexAX
Wow, Fiona is really causing so much trouble to get Lisa back, but I guess it's because she misses someone to bully. I'm so glad that people are seeing her for how she is and believing in Lisa. I knew you would find a way for them to stay at Alan's ;) The only thing I saw was "I've said we'll come up with somewhere else for Lisa to sta(y) tonight" Loved it! Alex :)
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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2012
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Wow, Fiona is really causing so much trouble to get Lisa back, but I guess it's because she misses someone to bully. I'm so glad that people are seeing her for how she is and believing in Lisa. I knew you would find a way for them to stay at Alan's ;) The only thing I saw was "I've said we'll come up with somewhere else for Lisa to sta(y) tonight" Loved it! Alex :)
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Comment Written 23-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2012
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Spot on! That's exactly what she's missing. Mind you, she still has Jack..... Thank you for your great review. I shall start editing the next chapter with renewed vigour! Alexis x
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Yes she still has Jack, poor man, but I don't think it gives her the same satisfaction, as with Lisa she had total control and was merciless with it. Jack could just leave when he had enough. You're welcome :) Alex.
Comment from MumEsGirl
Spoilsport. You stopped jsut at the good bit.
Wom Lisa's mother is total off her head. Bricks through the windows, not good.
I notice that Nick hasnt been heard of yet, I am hoping to hear more of hims soon.
kate
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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2012
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Spoilsport. You stopped jsut at the good bit.
Wom Lisa's mother is total off her head. Bricks through the windows, not good.
I notice that Nick hasnt been heard of yet, I am hoping to hear more of hims soon.
kate
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Comment Written 23-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2012
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Don't worry, I certainly make up for it in the next chapter! Thank you so much for your continued input and support. Alexis x