Let Children Show Us the Way
nonet contest17 total reviews
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, mystery writer, a great job writing this nonet poem about the way we should learn from the innocence and non judgmental nature of children, i wish you the best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011
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this is very well written, mystery writer, a great job writing this nonet poem about the way we should learn from the innocence and non judgmental nature of children, i wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011
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Thank you so much, sweetwoodjax, for your review and good luck wishes.
Comment from Linda England Bonam
This was a very nice nonet, and I loved what it said. We can learn from children, as they open their hearts for all to see. Nice job with this! Enjoyable to read.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011
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This was a very nice nonet, and I loved what it said. We can learn from children, as they open their hearts for all to see. Nice job with this! Enjoyable to read.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011
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Thank you, Linda, for your delightful review.
Comment from peggles
I enjoyed reading this short verse
Children only learn what we teach them
To our shame all our outspoken prejudices fill there minds
While in truth they see no color or creed in the playground
Shame on us for blurring this purity of heart
Your rhyming was perfect and the message strong
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011
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I enjoyed reading this short verse
Children only learn what we teach them
To our shame all our outspoken prejudices fill there minds
While in truth they see no color or creed in the playground
Shame on us for blurring this purity of heart
Your rhyming was perfect and the message strong
Comment Written 13-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011
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Thank you, peggles, for all the thought you put into your lovely review. I truly appreciate it.
Comment from Abiiyke
Great poem and great philosophy portrayed in it. The Greatest One ever lived said that except we become like children, we won't enter the kingdom. I share it with you. Let's go to the children and learn from them. It's a nonet poem. Goodluck!
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011
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Great poem and great philosophy portrayed in it. The Greatest One ever lived said that except we become like children, we won't enter the kingdom. I share it with you. Let's go to the children and learn from them. It's a nonet poem. Goodluck!
Comment Written 13-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011
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Thank you so much for your thoughtful review.
Comment from Priyanka24
i loved the pattern your poetry made, that's beautiful. you gave a very good message through your writing, i hope it get delivered to everyone..and then the world would be a better place to live...keep writing..:)
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i loved the pattern your poetry made, that's beautiful. you gave a very good message through your writing, i hope it get delivered to everyone..and then the world would be a better place to live...keep writing..:)
Priyanka24
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Comment Written 13-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from oNray
This is an interesting contest entry and I wish you luck. We could learn something here from the kids. At least it would last for a while
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This is an interesting contest entry and I wish you luck. We could learn something here from the kids. At least it would last for a while
Comment Written 13-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011
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Thank you, oNray, for your thoughtful review and good luck wishes.
Comment from amarherig14
What a beautiful Poem!I love the picture that goes so well with it.It is a very good thought to let their children guide us. They are so friendly and genuine they may lead us to more unity.It is well written . Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011
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What a beautiful Poem!I love the picture that goes so well with it.It is a very good thought to let their children guide us. They are so friendly and genuine they may lead us to more unity.It is well written . Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 13-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011
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Thank you for your thoughtful review.
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You are welcome. Warm regards,amarherig.