Poems of Love and Spirit
Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "Lovely Soul"This book is about love, God's Love most of all.
48 total reviews
Comment from Boogienights
Thank you for writing such a beautiful and emotional poem about your sister. I lost my sister last year and I hope that she found a place in heaven,because, like your sister she was a lovely soul.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2017
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Thank you for writing such a beautiful and emotional poem about your sister. I lost my sister last year and I hope that she found a place in heaven,because, like your sister she was a lovely soul.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2017
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review, I can see that you have been " there" and therefore you understand. Hope your sister is in heaven but if not we can pray for her that she will come to know the Lord.
Comment from lalajovanoski
Hello my dear friend, I very much enjoyed reading this beautifully written poem. I think that the content is great and a message is very clear and Powerful. Nice alliteration and good rhyming scheme throughout. Thank you very much for sharing this. With love, Lala
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Hello my dear friend, I very much enjoyed reading this beautifully written poem. I think that the content is great and a message is very clear and Powerful. Nice alliteration and good rhyming scheme throughout. Thank you very much for sharing this. With love, Lala
Comment Written 12-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Thank you for your wonderful and heartfelt review of my poem, what it meant to you and the rhyming scheme.
Comment from Connie C
Your beautiful poem offers light and comfort when suffering the loss of a loved one, in this case your sister. I'm so sorry about your sister, but it sounds like she might have suffered prior to her death and that she is in a better place now.
Thank you for sharing.
Connie
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Your beautiful poem offers light and comfort when suffering the loss of a loved one, in this case your sister. I'm so sorry about your sister, but it sounds like she might have suffered prior to her death and that she is in a better place now.
Thank you for sharing.
Connie
Comment Written 12-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Thank you for your wonderful and heartfelt review of my poem, it touched my heart greatly.
Comment from brooke harrison
hi gudbjorg,
what a truly touching poem. I have two family members currently battling cancer so it really hit home.
beautifully worded, flowed great, and full of emotion.
keep up the good work!
all the best - brooke
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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hi gudbjorg,
what a truly touching poem. I have two family members currently battling cancer so it really hit home.
beautifully worded, flowed great, and full of emotion.
keep up the good work!
all the best - brooke
Comment Written 12-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Thank you so much for a wonderful review, it is really precious to me.
Comment from pipersfancy
I am deeply moved by your lovely tribute to your sister. Beautifully written and heartfelt--this work transforms pain through faith and conviction in God's plan for us all.
pf
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2017
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I am deeply moved by your lovely tribute to your sister. Beautifully written and heartfelt--this work transforms pain through faith and conviction in God's plan for us all.
pf
Comment Written 11-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2017
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review filled with Gods Wisdom. Love, Gb
Comment from Irish Rain
Amen, and she truly is. Death is absolutely not the end, ever. But the beginning of peace, and pure serenity. I loved this beautiful tribute for your sister. God rest her soul. Blessings...
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2017
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Amen, and she truly is. Death is absolutely not the end, ever. But the beginning of peace, and pure serenity. I loved this beautiful tribute for your sister. God rest her soul. Blessings...
Comment Written 11-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2017
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Thank you so much for your kind and wise words in your review. Love, Gb
Comment from country ranch writer
Sorry for your loss cancer is a horrible thing to have to go through and so many of us can relate to this here on FS,you see my husband is battling stage four lung cancer.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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Sorry for your loss cancer is a horrible thing to have to go through and so many of us can relate to this here on FS,you see my husband is battling stage four lung cancer.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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Thank you so much for reviewing my poem and commenting on it in this way. Glad you like it. With love, Gb
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Comment from Ricky1024
"Happy Forever" in Heaven.
Mine are there too.
One [my Son Jason} was killed in a car accident...
{No fault of his}
The other {My wife Carolyn}
Couldn't take that loss and many other problems she hid...
She was gambling away the finances...
She took Her life eight months after Jason's Death in '03.
Well written dear and liked...
By Ricky 1024.
"Can You ever Imagine...
"In all Existences...
"What this is Like...
"What Pain, will Exist...
"What Miseries...
"Will Persist?"
"And what Power...
"Will Remain...
"With the...
"Brick Work that I must Lay...
"Each and Every Day...
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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"Happy Forever" in Heaven.
Mine are there too.
One [my Son Jason} was killed in a car accident...
{No fault of his}
The other {My wife Carolyn}
Couldn't take that loss and many other problems she hid...
She was gambling away the finances...
She took Her life eight months after Jason's Death in '03.
Well written dear and liked...
By Ricky 1024.
"Can You ever Imagine...
"In all Existences...
"What this is Like...
"What Pain, will Exist...
"What Miseries...
"Will Persist?"
"And what Power...
"Will Remain...
"With the...
"Brick Work that I must Lay...
"Each and Every Day...
Comment Written 11-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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Dear Ricky,
Thank you so much for your wonderful review, it was really helpful.
What a tragedy, my heart goes out to you and I pray for you that God will touch you with His Love. We all need the divine power to help us find meaning in life after such tragedy.
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Yes, and i get it writing here and from above...
Each and every day...
Ricky...
Comment from royowen
There are so many testimonies and instances of hope's reassurance, concerning one's ultimate destination in "passing over". I remember a young girl of 13 I'd written a song. She passed away when so young, a leukaemia victim saw Jesus, before she expired, the people in the hospital smelt a beautiful perfume. This is a simple but beautifully composed, and smooth work, in aabb rhyming, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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There are so many testimonies and instances of hope's reassurance, concerning one's ultimate destination in "passing over". I remember a young girl of 13 I'd written a song. She passed away when so young, a leukaemia victim saw Jesus, before she expired, the people in the hospital smelt a beautiful perfume. This is a simple but beautifully composed, and smooth work, in aabb rhyming, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 11-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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Thank you so much for your warm and heartfelt review, it was really helpful and a real blessing. Gb
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Well done
Comment from Mustang Patty
thank you so much for sharing this heartfelt send-off for your sister. I'm sure in Heaven, she is free from pain and much happier with Him and all the comfort He can offer,
~patty~
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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thank you so much for sharing this heartfelt send-off for your sister. I'm sure in Heaven, she is free from pain and much happier with Him and all the comfort He can offer,
~patty~
Comment Written 11-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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Thank your so much for your warm and meaningful review, it was very helpful to me. Gb
