Revisiting Newton
A tanka for Joan11 total reviews
Comment from Karen Stram
This is very funny and creative. I love the idea that apples might be able to fly if they had wings. I love your choice of artwork.
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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2011
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This is very funny and creative. I love the idea that apples might be able to fly if they had wings. I love your choice of artwork.
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Comment Written 16-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2011
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Hello Karen, my friend I am glad you visited and you said that you love everything about the poem but I am not sure why you rated it a four...can I improve somewhere, please let me know, appreciate your visit, thank you very much.