Controversial Family Grief - Buried
This is a poem about justice being served.11 total reviews
Comment from S. Marie Vernon
This is a wonderful tribute to Michael Jackson, Pop Icon and one of the worlds best performers. The colors of deep purple and the flower really held my attention and the story is about the outcome of the trial; the doctor on trial for Michael's death. This story could become four or five stars for me if the title were more about Michael and how he is missed. If the title and the words matched more the background colors of the piece, if you will. I do love the idea behind this tribute to Michael Jackson and the idea that our court systems sometimes do achieve justice in their decisions. Overall good poem. Thank you for this work.`S. Marie Vernon
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This is a wonderful tribute to Michael Jackson, Pop Icon and one of the worlds best performers. The colors of deep purple and the flower really held my attention and the story is about the outcome of the trial; the doctor on trial for Michael's death. This story could become four or five stars for me if the title were more about Michael and how he is missed. If the title and the words matched more the background colors of the piece, if you will. I do love the idea behind this tribute to Michael Jackson and the idea that our court systems sometimes do achieve justice in their decisions. Overall good poem. Thank you for this work.`S. Marie Vernon
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Comment Written 08-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2011
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Thanks, S. Marie Vernon