Reflections For The New Day
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Comment from Focused True North
A good message.. Rapid-fire imagery.
Like this line especially:
And while I drive and contemplate through this busy rush
A tiny child has stood for days for just a bowl of mush.
Yes, there is so much to be thankful for. This holiday season and all year long.
Thanks for sharing your inner self. -- North
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A good message.. Rapid-fire imagery.
Like this line especially:
And while I drive and contemplate through this busy rush
A tiny child has stood for days for just a bowl of mush.
Yes, there is so much to be thankful for. This holiday season and all year long.
Thanks for sharing your inner self. -- North
Comment Written 26-Dec-2004
Comment from venancio
a beautiful poetic flex of the muscles of the conscience... you did not attempt to wag your finger but instead just softly spoke your piece, and this made your poem very effective in delivering its message... a beautiful statement that can only come from a beautiful soul...
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a beautiful poetic flex of the muscles of the conscience... you did not attempt to wag your finger but instead just softly spoke your piece, and this made your poem very effective in delivering its message... a beautiful statement that can only come from a beautiful soul...
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2004