Reflections For The New Day
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Comment from melyuki
well Jj, let me say this grabbed me and sent me on a journey that unfolded into total delight. 'dancing across the stage of life' what a fabulous description. luv it. sounds like you're ready for an awesome day. May it shine.. and maybe I should think about getting some sleep, ready to wake up to my day, dancing across the stage of life... yum... great line..
have a fantastic day,
hugs n smiles Melxxxxxx
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2011
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well Jj, let me say this grabbed me and sent me on a journey that unfolded into total delight. 'dancing across the stage of life' what a fabulous description. luv it. sounds like you're ready for an awesome day. May it shine.. and maybe I should think about getting some sleep, ready to wake up to my day, dancing across the stage of life... yum... great line..
have a fantastic day,
hugs n smiles Melxxxxxx
Comment Written 23-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2011
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Thanks, Mel!
Comment from rudion
Very expressive and chock full of emotion and rich language. This is very well-written and gives one a sense of peace and joy when reading it. Great job.
Rudion
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2011
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Very expressive and chock full of emotion and rich language. This is very well-written and gives one a sense of peace and joy when reading it. Great job.
Rudion
Comment Written 23-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2011
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Glad you liked my poem. Thanks.
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
Good morning to my good friend Jewell. I have always enjoyed your poetry and here is another fine example as to "why?" I took the walk with you this morning and identified with your reasoning. Your poem caused emotions to surface in this ole heart. Great work! Loyd
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2011
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Good morning to my good friend Jewell. I have always enjoyed your poetry and here is another fine example as to "why?" I took the walk with you this morning and identified with your reasoning. Your poem caused emotions to surface in this ole heart. Great work! Loyd
Comment Written 23-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2011
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Hi Loyd! Thanks so much for stopping by! So happy this stirred emotion in you. To me, that's a great compliment.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, jewell, a great job writing this beautiful free verse poem about the memories and prayers that make themselves known at night when trying to sleep and waking up alone.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2011
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this is very well written, jewell, a great job writing this beautiful free verse poem about the memories and prayers that make themselves known at night when trying to sleep and waking up alone.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2011
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Thank you.
Comment from Malerie
Restless, Fading, Memories, Embraced, Defiant, Awakened, Kisses = Today, I'll dance. This is a poem within a poem. Each of the being line pulls the readers attention to the next line. The artwork chosen really adds to this piece.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2011
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Restless, Fading, Memories, Embraced, Defiant, Awakened, Kisses = Today, I'll dance. This is a poem within a poem. Each of the being line pulls the readers attention to the next line. The artwork chosen really adds to this piece.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2011
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Interesting that you point out the headlines. I was considering editing to make them read more like a sentence. Thanks for your comments.
Comment from Rama Rao
Excellent free verse which created good imagery. I could see you getting up from your bed reluctantly and stretching your arms. I can see the dreams lingering on your face. I liked your verse, but couldn't follow what you meant by horizontal waltz. Could you pl explain?
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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2011
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Excellent free verse which created good imagery. I could see you getting up from your bed reluctantly and stretching your arms. I can see the dreams lingering on your face. I liked your verse, but couldn't follow what you meant by horizontal waltz. Could you pl explain?
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Comment Written 23-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2011
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A horizontal waltz would be feeling the music lying down.Had I not woken alone, making love would be considered a " horizontal dance" as well.
Comment from daniela.albu
This is a moving free verse poem which is perfectly complemented by the artwork while the words have a musicality of their own. The rhythm of the poem suggest falling and falling into a sound sleep. This is an elegant piece of writing.
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This is a moving free verse poem which is perfectly complemented by the artwork while the words have a musicality of their own. The rhythm of the poem suggest falling and falling into a sound sleep. This is an elegant piece of writing.
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Comment Written 23-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2011
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Thank you. So glas you stopped by.
