Still A Rose
5-7-5 poetry26 total reviews
Comment from HPicasso
I agree about that. I think the flower does look prettier in the rain.. I really like this poem throught of the flower.. This is another very good haiku entry..with nice image... Best wishes!
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2011
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I agree about that. I think the flower does look prettier in the rain.. I really like this poem throught of the flower.. This is another very good haiku entry..with nice image... Best wishes!
Comment Written 16-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2011
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I'm so glad you like this poem, and I appreciate the review.
Comment from fairydancer
What a clever way to look at it - wish we could all just smile when the storms come in!
Good haiku form and flow. Excellent message. Beatiful presentation. Well thought out - Cally :)
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2011
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What a clever way to look at it - wish we could all just smile when the storms come in!
Good haiku form and flow. Excellent message. Beatiful presentation. Well thought out - Cally :)
Comment Written 16-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2011
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Thank you very much for this kind review.
Comment from S.Yocom
Our back yard is lined with rose of Sharon bushes, so I know what you mean in this sweet 5-7-5 poem, Donna. It presents a pretty picture, which I enjoyed.
Sally
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2011
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Our back yard is lined with rose of Sharon bushes, so I know what you mean in this sweet 5-7-5 poem, Donna. It presents a pretty picture, which I enjoyed.
Sally
Comment Written 16-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2011
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I'm so glad you read and reviewed my poem. Yes, I love those flowers.
Comment from Yvon
I like it! Each line has a nice flow, that carries over to the next. There is one thing is the picture you chose that of a rose? I can't tell. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2011
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I like it! Each line has a nice flow, that carries over to the next. There is one thing is the picture you chose that of a rose? I can't tell. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2011
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Yes, it is a "Rose of Sharon." Thanks for this nice review.
Comment from Hareem.S
A very lovely piece this is. Hard to write a short and strictly formatted piece, an convey your thoughts but you have done a good job. Very well chosen words.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2011
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A very lovely piece this is. Hard to write a short and strictly formatted piece, an convey your thoughts but you have done a good job. Very well chosen words.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2011
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Thank you, Hareem, for this thoughtful review. It encourages me:)
Comment from koneart
I don't know if I can match mine with yours--or any where equalling--this is lovely. Wonderfully done. It's well balanced and presented well. Kone
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2011
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I don't know if I can match mine with yours--or any where equalling--this is lovely. Wonderfully done. It's well balanced and presented well. Kone
Comment Written 16-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2011
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Kone, that is just super, I appreciate your saying this. I bet your poem will be very interesting and well worded.
Comment from Betty517
pink petals blowing
as soft raindrops gently taunt;
loveliness just smiles.
This is a beautiful poem. I love the flower in the rain, I can almost smell it's fragrance!
Betty
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2011
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pink petals blowing
as soft raindrops gently taunt;
loveliness just smiles.
This is a beautiful poem. I love the flower in the rain, I can almost smell it's fragrance!
Betty
Comment Written 16-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2011
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Betty, thanks for the thorough read and review. I'm glad you picked up on the senses of my poem:)
Comment from kiwigirl2821
hi Donna, what a gorgeous piece of work. I've been reading so many of these for this contest and they are all so far pretty good. This one is excellent in subject, delivery, cadence, syllable count and overall presentation. Good luck my friend. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2011
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hi Donna, what a gorgeous piece of work. I've been reading so many of these for this contest and they are all so far pretty good. This one is excellent in subject, delivery, cadence, syllable count and overall presentation. Good luck my friend. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 16-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2011
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Thank you, Kiwi....this is a very cheerful and helpful review. It is good to hear from you. LOL!
Comment from Piggies Grandma
I enjoyed reading your poem very much. It is cleverly written and very well thought out. The picture matches your words well, it is very lovely. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2011
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I enjoyed reading your poem very much. It is cleverly written and very well thought out. The picture matches your words well, it is very lovely. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2011
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Thank you so very much....a very nice review!!!
Comment from Rama Rao
The rain drops must have provided a soothing relief. I liked the expression loveliness smiles. You sure had a poetic eye to watch it and describe it for us. our eyes wouldn't have noticed it.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2011
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The rain drops must have provided a soothing relief. I liked the expression loveliness smiles. You sure had a poetic eye to watch it and describe it for us. our eyes wouldn't have noticed it.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2011
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Thank you, Ramarao, I really like this review and it helps me understand my poem better...have a really happy day.
