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Ballerinas of Winter

Ode to Winter

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Comment from TSPoet
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This is fantastic in my book
Even to remember what the writer wrote, your arrangment has stoled the show
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This is worth showing people for that alone
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With Heart
TSPoet

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2011

reply by the author on 28-Jul-2011
    Awww!! Thank you - you made my day!
reply by TSPoet on 28-Jul-2011
    No problem
Comment from RYME4U
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Nicely done. The illustration is very unique and original. The haiku is a delight to read.I like the dancinjg thyeme. Good job!

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2011

reply by the author on 28-Jul-2011
    thank you so much - i hope you are refering to the picture i just changed. i hated to do that - if i could not get the snow queen right - i had to at least get the dancers right. thank you once again
Comment from linsbm
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Before Winter comes, showers fall like silvery snow flakes, and we start to feel cool wind. Mood is breeze to the tone of winter music, as what this poem is all about. This is a nice haiku.

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2011

reply by the author on 28-Jul-2011
    Your review is better than my poem, but I am grateful for all the stars. thank you
Comment from Bloomer Burbs
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Hi the author

Love the 3rd line: 'snow queen applauding': delightful. Reminds me of the ABBA song 'Dancing Queen' which always made me want to dance. As it is a haiku about winter, in a warm coat of course, LOL.

I wish you all the very best in the competition.

Kind regards, Pete

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2011

reply by the author on 28-Jul-2011
    Thank you Pete, I love that song, also. You have not only given a great review - you made me laugh. a twofer!
Comment from sweetwoodjax
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this is very well written, mystery writer, a great job writing this poem about the ballet of winter, wonderful imagery, i enjoyed reading it and i wish you the best of luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 28-Jul-2011

reply by the author on 28-Jul-2011
    Oh, thank you so much. I wasn't sure about this one, but I love the snow queen myth.
reply by sweetwoodjax on 28-Jul-2011
    i loved the book, as a child i had a great illustrated book and i read it every day
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2011
    we are "winter mates". hugs
Comment from Karen Payton Holt
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Short and invokes the high spirits that snowflakes seem to conjure in us all!
Nicely done, and follows the 5-7-5 rule.
Good luck in the contest too.

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 Comment Written 28-Jul-2011

reply by the author on 28-Jul-2011
    thank you so much for your insightful review.