Where Aqua Waters Flow
Serenity by the sea26 total reviews
Comment from Bayberry
The serenity of this work easily touches the reader and is internalized with the result of contentment and satisfaction. The beauty is engaging...both words and illustration.
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The serenity of this work easily touches the reader and is internalized with the result of contentment and satisfaction. The beauty is engaging...both words and illustration.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2011
Comment from nancyjam
I love your description
of the aqua sea and the
calmness you felt on the
shore.
A lovely Nonet. Good luck
in the contest.
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I love your description
of the aqua sea and the
calmness you felt on the
shore.
A lovely Nonet. Good luck
in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2011
Comment from Chrisfiore
Hello Helvi2, I did enjoy this poem very much. As a Floridian now residing in Canada I miss the calm gulf waters that used to caress the shores I once roamed. Your piece took me back there, ever so briefly. Best to you. Chrisfiore
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Hello Helvi2, I did enjoy this poem very much. As a Floridian now residing in Canada I miss the calm gulf waters that used to caress the shores I once roamed. Your piece took me back there, ever so briefly. Best to you. Chrisfiore
Comment Written 19-Jul-2011
Comment from Belinda
Hi, Helvi, the whole presentation of your nonet is cool and pristine, just like the place you're describing here. You've got me convinced there is a place like that ... :)
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Hi, Helvi, the whole presentation of your nonet is cool and pristine, just like the place you're describing here. You've got me convinced there is a place like that ... :)
Comment Written 19-Jul-2011
Comment from poetbear
I agree and the sea is a great friend of mine.
Lovely write with exquisite metaphor and imagery.
Great image. Makes sense and reads well.
Just a gem.
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I agree and the sea is a great friend of mine.
Lovely write with exquisite metaphor and imagery.
Great image. Makes sense and reads well.
Just a gem.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2011
Comment from adewpearl
Helvi, your poem is in excellent syllable count and structure for the Nonet form.
I like the shore/roars rhyme and the lovely descriptive detail. You create a mood of serenity in a sea that never roars most effectively :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2011
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Helvi, your poem is in excellent syllable count and structure for the Nonet form.
I like the shore/roars rhyme and the lovely descriptive detail. You create a mood of serenity in a sea that never roars most effectively :-) Brooke
Comment Written 19-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2011
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Bless Your heart for such a beautiful review Brooke! I can't tell you how many times I re-wrote this poem! Your fantastic review means it was well worth the effort! Thank you my friend! :o) Helvi
Comment from mermaids
I love ocean colors especially aqua, they are soothing and beautiful to look at. You did well with thsi form and created a poem of serenity.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2011
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I love ocean colors especially aqua, they are soothing and beautiful to look at. You did well with thsi form and created a poem of serenity.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2011
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Thanks mermaids, I'm SO glad you loved what you read and found serenity within. Serenity has a soothing touch that always brings a smile. :o) Helvi
Comment from gigglegirl
I loved this poem!
I have written some Nonet poems, and I have learned that they are not very easy to write!
This is why I love FanStory, because there is so many great writers like you!
Good luck on your next piece!
gigglegirl
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2011
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I loved this poem!
I have written some Nonet poems, and I have learned that they are not very easy to write!
This is why I love FanStory, because there is so many great writers like you!
Good luck on your next piece!
gigglegirl
Comment Written 19-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2011
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Hi gigglegirl, Thank you for your lovely review. I have trouble writing Nonets too! When you get towards the end it's hard to keep within that syllable count. I appreciate your wonderful review and the fact that you became a fan of mine VERY much! :o) Helvi
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Yes!
The last syllable counts are very hard!
Comment from chita
Your author notes are superb-you have good imagery and a good flow with your Nonet--good syllable count as you write about the sea where aqua flows--I really enjoyed your poem-great job.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2011
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Your author notes are superb-you have good imagery and a good flow with your Nonet--good syllable count as you write about the sea where aqua flows--I really enjoyed your poem-great job.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2011
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Hi Chita, Thank you for your wonderful complimentary review! I'm SO glad you enjoyed the words I wrote. I hope your mind's eye whipped up some lovely imagery for you. Blessings, Helvi
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Helvi2
Your nonet poem reminds me of the beautiful beaches in Bermuda with the aqua water and pink sands
You have painted a very clear picture of beauty with your words.
Gert
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2011
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Hello Helvi2
Your nonet poem reminds me of the beautiful beaches in Bermuda with the aqua water and pink sands
You have painted a very clear picture of beauty with your words.
Gert
Comment Written 19-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2011
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Hi Gert, It's always a joy hearing from you my friend! especially since I haven't written much lately.! I've been to Bermuda and those lovely aqua waters are what inspired me to write this.Though it was quite a few years ago I still remember it well! It's gorgeous there isn't it?. Thank you SO much fro your lovely review! Hope you're doing well this summer. Smiles and Hugs, Helvi