My Little Muranos
the night life79 total reviews
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
what a mood your
tantalizing piece
of verse has put me
in, Victor....
I might have a glass of wine or
two tonight, with a few candles
scattered about a darkened room,
just to keep the feeling alive.... sigh!
thanks for sharing this my friend.
Margaret
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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what a mood your
tantalizing piece
of verse has put me
in, Victor....
I might have a glass of wine or
two tonight, with a few candles
scattered about a darkened room,
just to keep the feeling alive.... sigh!
thanks for sharing this my friend.
Margaret
Comment Written 15-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Ah Margaret, I have never doubted you are still alive. And your reviews are always open and honest without malice. I always enjoy when the Snowdon name sits atop a review. Thank you. I will get to reviewing a few some day. I hope.
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi victortouche,
Amusing, graphically descriptive, good flow to the lines. This creates a nice set of images centred on the Muranos.
Well done.
Patrick
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Hi victortouche,
Amusing, graphically descriptive, good flow to the lines. This creates a nice set of images centred on the Muranos.
Well done.
Patrick
Comment Written 15-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Thank you Patrick. Your praise lacked any sickly sweetness so it came through all the better.
Comment from Matoshka
I really enjoyed this. I loved the lights and a few drinks makes everything so smooth and dreamy. Haven't done it in years and brought back a lot of good memories to me. Loved the picture. Blessings
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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I really enjoyed this. I loved the lights and a few drinks makes everything so smooth and dreamy. Haven't done it in years and brought back a lot of good memories to me. Loved the picture. Blessings
Comment Written 15-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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And to you. Thank you.
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You are so welcome, I enjoyed it very much. Blessings
Comment from missy98writer
Victor,
your poem is splendidly written and rich in poetic imagery. Gorgeous art work and presentation. Symbolic Language: you effectively use both alliteration and metaphor. Rhyme and rhythm: great. Structure and form: uses originality in whatever he writes. I enjoyed the lines: "Only the lovely come here. Oh yes, the beautiful people slow down a degree. Drinks beckon love. Drinks beckon me. My little Muranos pourin'' light through me." I also line the last stanza in your excellent free verse: "I love my lighted little Muranos. The fan turns just enough heat." I enjoyed reading your writing. I'd recommend this poetic to other reviewers. Keep on writing creative poetry. Peace out and have a good weekend.
Melissa.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Victor,
your poem is splendidly written and rich in poetic imagery. Gorgeous art work and presentation. Symbolic Language: you effectively use both alliteration and metaphor. Rhyme and rhythm: great. Structure and form: uses originality in whatever he writes. I enjoyed the lines: "Only the lovely come here. Oh yes, the beautiful people slow down a degree. Drinks beckon love. Drinks beckon me. My little Muranos pourin'' light through me." I also line the last stanza in your excellent free verse: "I love my lighted little Muranos. The fan turns just enough heat." I enjoyed reading your writing. I'd recommend this poetic to other reviewers. Keep on writing creative poetry. Peace out and have a good weekend.
Melissa.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Missy, I will put you under a maintenance contract for my ego. Thank you.
Comment from pickthorn
Thank you for explaining the definition of Muranos. The thrust of your poem gave me a different, erotic picture that you were describing. This is really a wonderful poem. I enjoyed reading.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Thank you for explaining the definition of Muranos. The thrust of your poem gave me a different, erotic picture that you were describing. This is really a wonderful poem. I enjoyed reading.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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I, of course, always appreciate the sincer honesty of a review that simply states I thought it was wonderful. What more could a writer want? (see appendix) LOL
Comment from InterestingRon
Your beautifully composed poetry certainly brought that 'place between places' to life. I thought I was there!
Funny how drinks always seem to taste better in a fine glass?
A great illustration and presentation to showcase your words.
Ron
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Your beautifully composed poetry certainly brought that 'place between places' to life. I thought I was there!
Funny how drinks always seem to taste better in a fine glass?
A great illustration and presentation to showcase your words.
Ron
Comment Written 15-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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I'm happy to be of the same opinion. LOL
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Victor,
You taught me something new today as I have never heard of Muranos. You have written a great poem with excellent word choices and an easy flow. This is one of those poems that makes me want to tap my toe as I read the lines. Well done, chey
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Hi Victor,
You taught me something new today as I have never heard of Muranos. You have written a great poem with excellent word choices and an easy flow. This is one of those poems that makes me want to tap my toe as I read the lines. Well done, chey
Comment Written 15-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Chey, thank you. I went by one of your poems the other day. Self said to me, Victor you are really an ass. Stop right now and make time to read this sweet lady's poem. I said, No, I don't have time. Then I pretended I didn't notice it at all when I went by it. So then I went further into space and tried to decipher who was talking or thinking to who as to the fabrication of deceiving one's Self about what One saw. Or was that Me talking? I'm still workin' on this Chey. LOL Thank you.
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Your words made me smile, which is a good thing to do!
Comment from Herb
I liked the dreamy quality of this one. I didn't really understand the meaning of some of the metaphors, but I still thought it was good.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2011
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I liked the dreamy quality of this one. I didn't really understand the meaning of some of the metaphors, but I still thought it was good.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2011
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Thank you Herb.
Comment from Kentucky Sweet Pea
This is another excellent write this morning. I can certainly relate to it on all levels. Your imagery creates the ambiance required to make a write like this logical. Well-done!
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2011
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This is another excellent write this morning. I can certainly relate to it on all levels. Your imagery creates the ambiance required to make a write like this logical. Well-done!
Comment Written 15-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2011
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Ah Pea, I always enjoy when I get lucky enough that you are reviewing when I post. I just enjoy ur perspective in ur reviews. Thank you.
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lol! :)
Comment from Cynthia Tee
I love my lighted
little Muranos.
The fan turns
just enough heat.
This is so lovely and captures the atmosphere in a bar to the "T". Thank you for sharing and the artwork is stunning. Wish I had some Muranos. Molto bene friend.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2011
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I love my lighted
little Muranos.
The fan turns
just enough heat.
This is so lovely and captures the atmosphere in a bar to the "T". Thank you for sharing and the artwork is stunning. Wish I had some Muranos. Molto bene friend.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2011
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How nice to make a friend from so far away. One of the beatiful things about the internet we take for granted already. Thank you.