Strangest World
Sensible non-sense17 total reviews
Comment from Kingsland
This is an excellent piece of poetic art that just proves that when you really want to. You can shape and focus words in to just about and venture you want or need to. I enjoyed every facet of this excellent piece of poetic art. It was my pleasure to have read and written this response for... John
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2011
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This is an excellent piece of poetic art that just proves that when you really want to. You can shape and focus words in to just about and venture you want or need to. I enjoyed every facet of this excellent piece of poetic art. It was my pleasure to have read and written this response for... John
Comment Written 28-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2011
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Thank you for the review. Glad you enjoyed it. It is the second reason I write. The first is my own enjoyment and amusement and the connection with others the second. I don't sell anything. It would be like selling my children.
Comment from angel123
I think your poem is very well written and I enjoyed reading it. It held my attention and your artwork choice is great! I have no suggestions for any changes.
Angel123
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2011
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I think your poem is very well written and I enjoyed reading it. It held my attention and your artwork choice is great! I have no suggestions for any changes.
Angel123
Comment Written 28-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2011
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Thank you very much. Glad you liked it.
Comment from jlsavell
fdgsr, your poetry is so very well written. You have conveyed well that mankind so oft fervently believes that which all the eloquence in the world cannot reason its logic in any way and is often closed to the pure logic of other axioms. I could go on and on, this would make a wonderful round table discussion. very well written..loved it...jlsavell
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2011
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fdgsr, your poetry is so very well written. You have conveyed well that mankind so oft fervently believes that which all the eloquence in the world cannot reason its logic in any way and is often closed to the pure logic of other axioms. I could go on and on, this would make a wonderful round table discussion. very well written..loved it...jlsavell
Comment Written 28-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2011
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This is the first of several attempts to create this kind of a piece. All the rest succumbed to the delete button on my composer.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written iwth good form and good flow, a great job writing this poem filled with metaphors and imagery, i really enjoyed reading this. kudos.....
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2011
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this is very well written iwth good form and good flow, a great job writing this poem filled with metaphors and imagery, i really enjoyed reading this. kudos.....
Comment Written 28-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2011
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Thank you for the nice review. Glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from DIS-illusioned
--"The day is blue and night is green,
the strangest world I've ever seen "
Huh, I'd say!
--"purple is the sweetest sound."
Hmm! Reminds me of those 'special' folks who can 'see' sounds in colors ... The scientific term for them alludes me now.
--Good rhymes and rhythmic flow.
--Yes, your poem does conjure strange imagery. Nicely done.
--No glaring grammar issues.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2011
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--"The day is blue and night is green,
the strangest world I've ever seen "
Huh, I'd say!
--"purple is the sweetest sound."
Hmm! Reminds me of those 'special' folks who can 'see' sounds in colors ... The scientific term for them alludes me now.
--Good rhymes and rhythmic flow.
--Yes, your poem does conjure strange imagery. Nicely done.
--No glaring grammar issues.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2011
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How about politicians who can in the dark and are blinded by truth and honesty. Thank you for reacting exactly as I intended people to respond when they read such things.
Comment from kiwisteveh
Ahhh, I love the smell of nonsense in the morning!
Your poem rolls off the tongue well, all except for one curious and striking break in the rhyme scheme (lines 15/16) - puzzling when the rest is so complete.
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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2011
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Ahhh, I love the smell of nonsense in the morning!
Your poem rolls off the tongue well, all except for one curious and striking break in the rhyme scheme (lines 15/16) - puzzling when the rest is so complete.
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Comment Written 28-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2011
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Thank you. I agree, but you have to use a bit of poetic musicality while reading those lines. Call it poetic license. I struggled with 11/12 but passed it as it is.
Comment from 7thpoet
A very interesting look at the world and all. Since no errors in both spelling and grammar are present, and the poem itself has a certain flair to it, my attention it did arouse. Nicely written.
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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2011
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A very interesting look at the world and all. Since no errors in both spelling and grammar are present, and the poem itself has a certain flair to it, my attention it did arouse. Nicely written.
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Comment Written 28-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2011
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Thank you for the nice review. Your comments I do appreciate.