The Glass Cat Eye
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "A Meeting of the Minds"Talking to the dead has its consequences
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Comment from quashdog
Steven and Doc Conelly get to know each other a little better. The chapter read a little rushed, like you were trying to put it behind you and move on.
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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2011
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Steven and Doc Conelly get to know each other a little better. The chapter read a little rushed, like you were trying to put it behind you and move on.
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Comment Written 29-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2011
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No. I'm sorry it felt that way to you. This is a short story that I have to put into small chapters. In the book, the chapters will be much longer. But if I make them too long here, people won't read it. But thank you for the rating. And I hope you will read Chapter One and Two.