Perspective
Acrostic Poem18 total reviews
Comment from markk
well written and a great piece with a strong message on perspective. I enjoyed this though I would recommend putting a definition of Ebulliently as that's a new word for me and for many others, I'm sure.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2011
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well written and a great piece with a strong message on perspective. I enjoyed this though I would recommend putting a definition of Ebulliently as that's a new word for me and for many others, I'm sure.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2011
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Thanks for the review and suggestion. I love to see words I am not familiar with and then discover their meaning. Thank you again.-Judy
Comment from Linda England Bonam
You told this marvelous story very well! I believe you have a winner for the contest! This is an acrostic with a true story to tell.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2011
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You told this marvelous story very well! I believe you have a winner for the contest! This is an acrostic with a true story to tell.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2011
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Thank you so very much. Your words warm my heart today. -Judy
Comment from nora arjuna
hi judith. your acrostic is well written and flows smoothly. it was a nice read about how changes affect our life and change our perspective. best wishes.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2011
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hi judith. your acrostic is well written and flows smoothly. it was a nice read about how changes affect our life and change our perspective. best wishes.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2011
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Thank you very much for the review and kind words. -Judy
Comment from bbowen6757
Interesting write, I'm working on an Acrostic for the contest. Well done, I enjoyed the read.
Thanks for sharing,
Bobby
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2011
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Interesting write, I'm working on an Acrostic for the contest. Well done, I enjoyed the read.
Thanks for sharing,
Bobby
Comment Written 29-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2011
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Good luck with your entry too. Thank you for reviewing and commenting. -Judy
Comment from Kathy58
This is a wonderful Acrostic poem that you have created here. Life has been throwing me a lot of curve balls lately and I truly need to put everything into the correct perspective or i will totally fall apart. I really loved your poem. It has very strong, yet gentle descriptive words and a beautiful rhythm and rhyme to it also. It paints a very vivid picture in this reader mind, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2011
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This is a wonderful Acrostic poem that you have created here. Life has been throwing me a lot of curve balls lately and I truly need to put everything into the correct perspective or i will totally fall apart. I really loved your poem. It has very strong, yet gentle descriptive words and a beautiful rhythm and rhyme to it also. It paints a very vivid picture in this reader mind, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2011
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Kathy58, thank you, thank you! I am humbled by the six stars and so very greatful. My heart needed this boost today. -Judy
Comment from WilliamDeen
Very good acrostic work. The cadence was excellent and the rhymes worked well. Good message telling your readers that tomorrow is another day.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2011
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Very good acrostic work. The cadence was excellent and the rhymes worked well. Good message telling your readers that tomorrow is another day.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2011
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Thank you WilliamDeen. Your generous rating and kind comments are uplifting to this writer. -Judy
Comment from peacetoall
Thank you..this is the first acrostic poem I have read...and in it was a good message..looking ahead for better times..we all need them. All in all it was an enjoyable read,,,cheers.
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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2011
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Thank you..this is the first acrostic poem I have read...and in it was a good message..looking ahead for better times..we all need them. All in all it was an enjoyable read,,,cheers.
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Comment Written 29-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2011
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Thank you very much for the review. Your words...all in all and the four stars tell me there needed to be improvement. Could you please advise. I want to be the best I can be. thank you -Judy
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Well..bearing in mind that i have only started writing a month ago myself.. I will hope this sounds like advice..Essentially a fresh pattern God is starting to weave... I just feel this line is a little too long..and could maybe sound better like this--essentially a fresh pattern, god only to weave. thats about it really judith..i have yet to fully understand poetry and its many guises...hope this was of some use...
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Thanks for responding. I am happy with the piece as entered, but appreciate your input. I find poetry is such a personal type of writing that I find it difficult to try to improve up another's work unless I spot spelling errors or a rhythm that is not in line with the contest rules. I wish you luck writing and look forward to reading your work. -Judy
Comment from Eternal Muse
A beautiful acrostic for Perspective. Very well done, every line counts and brings out another facet of the word. Excellent artistic presentation and picture.
Well done - I wish you luck in the contest with this excellent entry.
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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2011
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A beautiful acrostic for Perspective. Very well done, every line counts and brings out another facet of the word. Excellent artistic presentation and picture.
Well done - I wish you luck in the contest with this excellent entry.
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Comment Written 29-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2011
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Thank you for your generous rating and kind review. -Judy
