Comment from sheilanewton

Excellent

mmm...interesting. I love the way that this senyru is presented. Wonderful colours and a magical golden background.
Are you sure you wanted this to look so magical, given your message of the decline of religion?
Just kidding - I thought this was a really special poem, every delightful word chosen to perfection.
Well done.

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 Comment Written 17-Feb-2011

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2011

Believe it or not, I was wondering about the same thing! He he. But I just could not go with anything drab as I'm too much in love with color. I really appreciate your awesome review and for taking the time to read and comment sheila. Best wishes...Bev

Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

AWEsome you!!! You are very good at these little writes and I always love reading them to see where you go next!!! Bravo for another real beauty!!!!

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 Comment Written 17-Feb-2011

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2011

Hi Beautiful. Thanks for your great review. You have me beaming from ear to ear. So appreciate your support my friend! Hugs, Bev