Debbie Did It
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Comment from CodyJack
Great artwork to go along with this great poem. I liked the humor in it and the rhythm of the way the lines went into each other. Good luck in the contest. You have good imagery. Your friend, Cody
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2011
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Great artwork to go along with this great poem. I liked the humor in it and the rhythm of the way the lines went into each other. Good luck in the contest. You have good imagery. Your friend, Cody
Comment Written 15-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2011
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Thank you so much kind sir for this wonderful review. Have never done one like this so was not sure how to go about it...I did research the style and think it is correct format...thanks again xoxo
Comment from pearlydoo
This is so cute! I can see the children wanting to hear this story over and over again. Well written especially for those who want to learn t;here ABC's. An easy one to follow for the kids. Upbeat entertaining and kid friendly. A two thumbs up.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2011
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This is so cute! I can see the children wanting to hear this story over and over again. Well written especially for those who want to learn t;here ABC's. An easy one to follow for the kids. Upbeat entertaining and kid friendly. A two thumbs up.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2011
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Oh my! I don't know what to say except thank you so much. I have never done one of these and when it was suggested that writing a story was not challenging from my style I simply ask the reviewer to do one and see how it went...I loved doing it but jeepers it was hard! lol...aw well you have given me hope that perhaps I wasn't so wrong after all. Thank you for that. xoxo
Comment from vickib
Oh this is so cute, I love everything about it the story, the way you did the text and colors and the picture. Yeah Debbie did it. I love the pink lollipop kitchen. I like the way it sounds when you read it out loud. It would be great to read to my granddaughter, her eyes would light up at all the stuff that's going on. Then she would be amazed to when I showed her it was the alphabet going down the side. I don't know who would like it more me or her. Great job I enjoyed this so much. Cute, cute. XO Vicki
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2011
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Oh this is so cute, I love everything about it the story, the way you did the text and colors and the picture. Yeah Debbie did it. I love the pink lollipop kitchen. I like the way it sounds when you read it out loud. It would be great to read to my granddaughter, her eyes would light up at all the stuff that's going on. Then she would be amazed to when I showed her it was the alphabet going down the side. I don't know who would like it more me or her. Great job I enjoyed this so much. Cute, cute. XO Vicki
Comment Written 15-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2011
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Thank you so much ... I didn't know how to write a poem like this so I just put pen to paper and started. Sometimes that's just what you have to do... One of my reviewers said it wasn't challenging if it was a story poem but, politely I had to disagree I thought is was harder than snot dripping..oops did I say that...oh well guess I did...giggles there goes that Debbie again...thanks again. xoxo
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LOL! I thoguht about that too because I'd never seen one done the way you did it and I was was thinking it would be harder to do it your way. GOOD JOB taking that on. Love Debbie!
Comment from Slush Pile
Correct me if I'm wrong, but this seems to be a short story as opposed to a poem. It's cute and interesting but story form does not challenge the writer as the contest is intended to. Thus, the four star rating. Still, I wish you luck. Blessings, Slush Pile
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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2011
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Correct me if I'm wrong, but this seems to be a short story as opposed to a poem. It's cute and interesting but story form does not challenge the writer as the contest is intended to. Thus, the four star rating. Still, I wish you luck. Blessings, Slush Pile
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Comment Written 14-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2011
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Hi SlushPile,
I am extremely familiar with acrostic poetry and my understanding of any "poem" is that it tells it's own story and certainly doing an acrostic with this many letters is a crazy challenge...I have never done this specific kind of acrostic but, here's my challenge to you...if you think it's easy and doesn't challenge then I invite you to enter this same blind contest, write one and let the readers be the judge...lol
A reviewer can only review from their heart and stand true to the integrity of their thought process. If you believe my work is a "4" Good and needs work then that's what it is to you...but I wonder at your comment that this did not "challenge" me...awww well we will see if you take up the challenge.
tc and thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. xoxo
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What is an abcedarian poem? Why do we write abcedarian poems? An abcedarian poem is a poem with verses or words beginning with the successive letters of the alphabet. The first line could start with the first letter of the alphabet: A. Then, the following lines could start with B, C, F, H, K, M, etc. Here's a brief example, for illustrative purposes only: A man runs But Can not Find that which He has lost: Kind of in the dark- Midnight of the soul. An abcedarian poem is often used to help students learn the alphabet in a fun way.
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You are absolutely correct. When I read a couple of the rhyming pieces, I mistook the rules for being that the piece must rhyme. Please forgive my ignorance...I have upgraded to a five. Blessings, denny
Comment from Veekz
An excellent story worded well into this acrostic. Nothing seems forced or words put there just because it had to start with a particular letter - very well done :)
All the best in the contest!
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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2011
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An excellent story worded well into this acrostic. Nothing seems forced or words put there just because it had to start with a particular letter - very well done :)
All the best in the contest!
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Comment Written 14-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2011
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my work Veekz... much appreciated. xoxo