The Heir Apparent
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "A First Round Knockout"A family learns their father is a serial killer
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Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
I was overjoyed to see you had posted this chapter, and after James's speech I have tears in my eyes! You have written this so well that it feels like a real event - not fiction. This is so well done!
Giddy
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2011
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I was overjoyed to see you had posted this chapter, and after James's speech I have tears in my eyes! You have written this so well that it feels like a real event - not fiction. This is so well done!
Giddy
Comment Written 12-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2011
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It is actually based on a real event. I was once interviewed by a very rude and obnoxious television reporter...this partially what I said (although the interview was not about a murder) and what I later wished had said. I had fun writing this chapter.
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Well done I'd say! Sounds like it was invaluable experience â?? G
Comment from marcellawachtel
Since the speech James made made up a lot of this chapter, it had to be a knockout, and it was. Really well done,impressive in its straightforwardness and lack of euphemisms.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2011
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Since the speech James made made up a lot of this chapter, it had to be a knockout, and it was. Really well done,impressive in its straightforwardness and lack of euphemisms.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2011
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Thank you so very much, I am pleased you liked this one.
Comment from Belinda
Hi, Sasha, this is ultimately fabulous! Though this is nearly the same as he last version, it touches me as it touches Mac, Mom, and most of the reporters. I'm also very proud of James. I was in the reporters' shoes once, and now I feel bad about it ... :)
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2011
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Hi, Sasha, this is ultimately fabulous! Though this is nearly the same as he last version, it touches me as it touches Mac, Mom, and most of the reporters. I'm also very proud of James. I was in the reporters' shoes once, and now I feel bad about it ... :)
Comment Written 12-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2011
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Not all reporters are obnoxious. But for some reason when some are covering a major story they seem to go off the deep end and ask stupid questions and are only looking for the sensational side of the story, not the truth. Don't take it personal, I have met a few that were very conscientious and worked hard to get the truth...sadly too many are the opposite.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I feel I repeat myself in every review, but you did another wonderful job.
The heartbreaking realization that the man that was my father never existed. (the man WHO was)
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2011
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I feel I repeat myself in every review, but you did another wonderful job.
The heartbreaking realization that the man that was my father never existed. (the man WHO was)
Comment Written 12-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2011
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I hate both the word 'who' and 'whom', they are right up there with 'got'...words that never should have been invented, at least not for people like me. That aside, I will correct the error. I am thrilled you liked this one and you can repeat yourself all you want, it doesn't bother me one bit.
Comment from words
Love Jame's intelligent and hear-felt soliloquy.
There was such wisdom in what he said.
Would that people in real life would call press conferences and say something of this heft and weight.
Bravo!!!
Looking forward to my next fix!!!
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2011
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Love Jame's intelligent and hear-felt soliloquy.
There was such wisdom in what he said.
Would that people in real life would call press conferences and say something of this heft and weight.
Bravo!!!
Looking forward to my next fix!!!
Comment Written 12-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2011
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This is actually similar to an interview I had with a television reporter in Seattle. Needless to say, it was never aired. Glad you liked it. I had fun writing it.
Comment from RKagan
This chapter took James' character to a new level. He is strong and (as we know) very intellient. Mom is coming into her own too. This is a great book. Can't wait for the next post.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2011
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This chapter took James' character to a new level. He is strong and (as we know) very intellient. Mom is coming into her own too. This is a great book. Can't wait for the next post.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2011
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Thanks so much. Lots more twists and turns to come. Glad you are enjoying this.
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It really is incredible, Sasha.
Comment from lola29
Wow! I'm in awe after James' speech to the reporters. There is not a thing typical about him; he's an extraordinary human being. I could never summon up the strength he possess. This was another magnificent read.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2011
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Wow! I'm in awe after James' speech to the reporters. There is not a thing typical about him; he's an extraordinary human being. I could never summon up the strength he possess. This was another magnificent read.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2011
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Thank you so very much. As you can tell, I am not particularly fond of reporters and had fun with this chapter.
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Smurph,
I haven't read the preceding chapters but because of the way you wrote this one I felt as if I had. What a horror to find out your father was a killer...or was he? You have good writing skills which made this a compelling and provocative read. I had no trouble putting myself on the courthouse steps and could have cheered as the reporters were told off in style..wishing I had a six for you. Blessings, chey
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2011
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Hi Smurph,
I haven't read the preceding chapters but because of the way you wrote this one I felt as if I had. What a horror to find out your father was a killer...or was he? You have good writing skills which made this a compelling and provocative read. I had no trouble putting myself on the courthouse steps and could have cheered as the reporters were told off in style..wishing I had a six for you. Blessings, chey
Comment Written 12-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2011
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Thank you so very much. I am especially pleased knowing you say this not having read previous chapters.
Comment from marcii
Having James speak first would have helped his mother a lot. She probably had planned what she was going to say with the Lawyer but once James had spoken it was little to say.
Good chapter as always..
Marcii
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2011
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Having James speak first would have helped his mother a lot. She probably had planned what she was going to say with the Lawyer but once James had spoken it was little to say.
Good chapter as always..
Marcii
Comment Written 12-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2011
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James can be a formidable presence when necessary, seeing Mom's so vulnerable left him no choice. I am pleased you enjoyed this chapter.
Comment from InterestingRon
Hi Smurphy
Another great flowing read.
Well, James is really hitting the high notes now. What a pity he's not a real guy. We need someone like him to put the media in it's place.
Fabulous writing.
Ron
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2011
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Hi Smurphy
Another great flowing read.
Well, James is really hitting the high notes now. What a pity he's not a real guy. We need someone like him to put the media in it's place.
Fabulous writing.
Ron
Comment Written 12-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2011
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I'll tell you a secret....many years ago I was confronted by a group of obnoxious reporters and I swore if I ever got the chance I would find away to put them in their place...James's speech came from the heart (my heart). Glad you liked this one.
