Reflections For The New Day
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Comment from nancyjam
I love the thoughts expressed
in your poem - something for
everyone to ponder.
Well crafted, nice rhythm and rhyme.
I enjoyed reading it. Best of luck
in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2011
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I love the thoughts expressed
in your poem - something for
everyone to ponder.
Well crafted, nice rhythm and rhyme.
I enjoyed reading it. Best of luck
in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2011
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Thank you
Comment from G.B. Smith
Hi there Jewell
This is without a doubt the finest piece of poetry that I have ever read of yours. Your long absence has been noted and I hope you are well and happy now
Bear
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Hi there Jewell
This is without a doubt the finest piece of poetry that I have ever read of yours. Your long absence has been noted and I hope you are well and happy now
Bear
Comment Written 09-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2011
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Thank you, bear! Great to hear from you
Comment from ameen786
I wonder why your pen name is visionarypoet, but not any more. Vision-you have it; and what a great vision, so full of light, wisdom and counsel. Every single stanza is craftily composed, with deep insight:
"Take time to rest and listen
To the truth which sits within
Rid yourself of anger
Resentment, fear; all sin."
Thanks for sharing and God bless.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2011
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I wonder why your pen name is visionarypoet, but not any more. Vision-you have it; and what a great vision, so full of light, wisdom and counsel. Every single stanza is craftily composed, with deep insight:
"Take time to rest and listen
To the truth which sits within
Rid yourself of anger
Resentment, fear; all sin."
Thanks for sharing and God bless.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2011
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Thank you so very much
This is an honor! ;)
Comment from Kingsland
This is why I love to read your poetic views. You write in truth and wisdom and view the world as it should be. You are a master poet, whether you know it or not. But it really doesn't matter, that's true. Cause I know the mastery of poetic thoughts within you... This should get at least seven stars, not just six. This is the poetic arts at its very best... John
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2011
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This is why I love to read your poetic views. You write in truth and wisdom and view the world as it should be. You are a master poet, whether you know it or not. But it really doesn't matter, that's true. Cause I know the mastery of poetic thoughts within you... This should get at least seven stars, not just six. This is the poetic arts at its very best... John
Comment Written 09-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2011
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John, so good to hear from you. The shining review is an honpr. :)
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is not your true rating, i am giving you this because i am not able to read the poem because it fades into the background color. i tried turning the screen this way and that and couldn't make out the words. i'll change it to a five if you can change it to where it's legible to me. better. can read it now, beautiful words, very descriptive and full of imagery
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2011
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this is not your true rating, i am giving you this because i am not able to read the poem because it fades into the background color. i tried turning the screen this way and that and couldn't make out the words. i'll change it to a five if you can change it to where it's legible to me. better. can read it now, beautiful words, very descriptive and full of imagery
Comment Written 09-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2011
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Hi. I truly apreciate your suggestion. I changed the color. I an using my pbone to post
Not sure I am seeing whaf you all see. Let me know if oy works better
Off to church,.will check back later
Comment from Nanny 6
Awesome poem spoken from the Word and put into a beautiful song. Your words touched my heart so much...we need to be reminded of our heart's intentions, and you did that in a most eloquent way! Judy
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Awesome poem spoken from the Word and put into a beautiful song. Your words touched my heart so much...we need to be reminded of our heart's intentions, and you did that in a most eloquent way! Judy
Comment Written 09-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2011
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Judy, so good to be back and am honor to receive these pretty stars from you
Thank you!
Comment from Veekz
This is a fab poem on having an open heart filled with love rather then boastful ways and a wicked heart.
Can I just suggest changing the color of the font or background? Pink on purple is a little hard to read lol :)
Other then that it's fab!
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2011
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This is a fab poem on having an open heart filled with love rather then boastful ways and a wicked heart.
Can I just suggest changing the color of the font or background? Pink on purple is a little hard to read lol :)
Other then that it's fab!
Comment Written 09-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2011
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I changed the color and hope it's better? Thanks so much!
Comment from Jean Lutz
1 Corinthians 13 in poetic voice. I have missed your voice, dear friend. My only suggestion for this is using a better contrast of background and font. These old eyes aren't as good as they use to be. I love the new picture of you in your About VisionaryPoet777.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2011
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1 Corinthians 13 in poetic voice. I have missed your voice, dear friend. My only suggestion for this is using a better contrast of background and font. These old eyes aren't as good as they use to be. I love the new picture of you in your About VisionaryPoet777.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2011
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Thank you, Jean! Let me know if it's more readable
I can't seem to find the "bold" setting ...
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Much gentler on aging eyes. Thank you.
Comment from rama devi
Hello dear jewell this is potent poem, rich in spiritual insight and wisdom. All is great but I especially liked the content of these stanzas-
Although good works seem kindly
To any human eye
A holy God looks in your heart
Intention He will find
Before you boast of victories
Be sure to open wide your heart
A haughty saint is irony
His light will have no part
One spag note-
A broken heart layed (LAID) open
For all the world to view
One more suggestion is to alter the font color or background color as it is a slight stain on the eyes to read as is.
The choice to use no end-line punctuaiton suits his nicely.
Thanks for sharing
Love, rd
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2011
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Hello dear jewell this is potent poem, rich in spiritual insight and wisdom. All is great but I especially liked the content of these stanzas-
Although good works seem kindly
To any human eye
A holy God looks in your heart
Intention He will find
Before you boast of victories
Be sure to open wide your heart
A haughty saint is irony
His light will have no part
One spag note-
A broken heart layed (LAID) open
For all the world to view
One more suggestion is to alter the font color or background color as it is a slight stain on the eyes to read as is.
The choice to use no end-line punctuaiton suits his nicely.
Thanks for sharing
Love, rd
Comment Written 09-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2011
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Thank you so very much, rama dear!
Comment from write hand blue
In my opinion this poem has a good descriptive tone,is concise and creative.... with a balance that is combined with a well executed word flow....Tc Mel....
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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2011
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In my opinion this poem has a good descriptive tone,is concise and creative.... with a balance that is combined with a well executed word flow....Tc Mel....
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2011
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Thank you!
