Poems of Love and Spirit
Viewing comments for Chapter 36 "Master of Love"This book is about love, God's Love most of all.
28 total reviews
Comment from winspiration
This is such a beautiful poem it had me from the start, the flow just takes you in I really enjoyed this read, it is so well done thank you for sharing this.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2010
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This is such a beautiful poem it had me from the start, the flow just takes you in I really enjoyed this read, it is so well done thank you for sharing this.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2010
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Well, it's from the depth of my heart, an expression of the greatest love of all, the Spirit of God.
Comment from Magics02
This is an exceptional write for sure here. I love the image it brought to my mind and the picture you used is so lovely. I commend you on this write:) magics
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2010
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This is an exceptional write for sure here. I love the image it brought to my mind and the picture you used is so lovely. I commend you on this write:) magics
Comment Written 06-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2010
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Thank you for your kind review of my poem and the photo of the lily I took in my own window at a very spectacular time in Iceland at night in the mid night sun. Bot the poem and the picture represent something that only God can do. Thank you so much for your helpful review.
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Yes and I so agree with this one:)
Comment from Jen Gentry
really enjoyed this uplifting spiritual poem. The meter is lovely and the rhyme is good. Thank yo for sharing this. God bless and good luck.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2010
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really enjoyed this uplifting spiritual poem. The meter is lovely and the rhyme is good. Thank yo for sharing this. God bless and good luck.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2010
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Thank you so much for your great review, really glad to hear that it lifted your spirit and inspired your heart. Lovely to think about.
Comment from Patricia0129
Good read. I enjoyed this poem touching on the truest of love...So very are to find. It seems so onesided most of the time. Love w/no boundaries does give the soul wings to take flight...Sad sometime someone shoots an arrow that kills it. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2010
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Good read. I enjoyed this poem touching on the truest of love...So very are to find. It seems so onesided most of the time. Love w/no boundaries does give the soul wings to take flight...Sad sometime someone shoots an arrow that kills it. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 05-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2010
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Thanks for great review, really appreciate you taking the time reflect on my poem. It was really helpful.
Comment from RYME4U
Beautiful flow and rhythm in this poem,. You can feel the love and adoration in every word.The rhymes a great, too.
The poem shows how boundless and eternal love is. Great work!
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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Beautiful flow and rhythm in this poem,. You can feel the love and adoration in every word.The rhymes a great, too.
The poem shows how boundless and eternal love is. Great work!
Comment Written 13-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind review, I'm greatly honoured.
Comment from Valkarie
This is a wonderful written piece of poetry which recognizes love for what its worth. Your piece flows with a powerful and intriguing balance capturing the essence of the piece so brilliantly. A most creative piece well described and well written. A most creative piece of writing.
Valkarie...
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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This is a wonderful written piece of poetry which recognizes love for what its worth. Your piece flows with a powerful and intriguing balance capturing the essence of the piece so brilliantly. A most creative piece well described and well written. A most creative piece of writing.
Valkarie...
Comment Written 13-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2010
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Thank you Valkarie for your wonderful review, I am really honoured.
Comment from lgm859
Nicely and lovingly written poem. Good choice of words, usage and smoothly flowing. You have such a creative imagination when it come to love and use of describing your feelings about loving someone.
Well done.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2010
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Nicely and lovingly written poem. Good choice of words, usage and smoothly flowing. You have such a creative imagination when it come to love and use of describing your feelings about loving someone.
Well done.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2010
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Thank you so much for your loving comment about my poem. It was really helpful.
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Thank you so much for your loving comment about my poem. It was really helpful.
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you're very welcome
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you're very welcome.
Comment from Sarah_Goldwell
This is a very well written poem. It is well presented and flows smoothly. I am sure many on here will identify with the words of your poem as there seems to be a lot of posts about faith and religion.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2010
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This is a very well written poem. It is well presented and flows smoothly. I am sure many on here will identify with the words of your poem as there seems to be a lot of posts about faith and religion.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2010
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Thank you so much for your pleasant review. It was really helpful.
Comment from Mary Ann MCPhedran
BEUTIFULLY WRITTEN THE SCRIPT WAS PERFECT.It had imagery and flow. You express your spiritual message well. I enjoyed reading this No need for editing. Thanks for sharing it with me.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2010
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BEUTIFULLY WRITTEN THE SCRIPT WAS PERFECT.It had imagery and flow. You express your spiritual message well. I enjoyed reading this No need for editing. Thanks for sharing it with me.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2010
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Thank you for your wonderful reply, it was joy to read it and it deeply encouraged me. It sure was a big help.
Comment from Ann Smith
This is a beautiful poem about God's love. It has a peaceful slow rhythmic feel, and each stanza seems to build on the stanza before it. In the last stanza there is a typo in the second line. It seems like it should read total fulfillment shall be gained. I'm not sure exactly what would be best but it's not quite right there. ann
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2010
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This is a beautiful poem about God's love. It has a peaceful slow rhythmic feel, and each stanza seems to build on the stanza before it. In the last stanza there is a typo in the second line. It seems like it should read total fulfillment shall be gained. I'm not sure exactly what would be best but it's not quite right there. ann
Comment Written 29-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2010
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You're right, thank you for pointing it out to me. It was really helpful