Tales to Terrify Tots
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Comment from moosegal
Most excellent story and a very well deserved Seal of Quality. I just loved it and it's the style of writing I would like to pursue - funny, yet it makes you think. Great imagination. Keep up the good works!!
reply by the author on 07-May-2012
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Most excellent story and a very well deserved Seal of Quality. I just loved it and it's the style of writing I would like to pursue - funny, yet it makes you think. Great imagination. Keep up the good works!!
Comment Written 07-May-2012
reply by the author on 07-May-2012
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You're very kind, thank you. I apologies for making you think, that was never my intention
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Comment from MumEsGirl
This was brilliant. You certainly have put a new face to the bedtime terrors. I love the idea of Annabelle giving out to the bogeyman. Poor chap, hope he doesnt get demoted when his elders get to hear this
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kate
reply by the author on 06-May-2012
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This was brilliant. You certainly have put a new face to the bedtime terrors. I love the idea of Annabelle giving out to the bogeyman. Poor chap, hope he doesnt get demoted when his elders get to hear this
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kate
Comment Written 06-May-2012
reply by the author on 06-May-2012
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Thanks. I'm not entirely sure Annabelle was being honest,but he knows when he's beaten
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Either way, I love her spirit
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kate
Comment from WRITER1
I would say this Bogey man is in deep poop. This little girl seems to have a good grip on this guy. She will work him a lot tonight.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2010
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I would say this Bogey man is in deep poop. This little girl seems to have a good grip on this guy. She will work him a lot tonight.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2010
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The double entendres you've just made are so, so wrong, but thanks for the review. Yes, the little girls is always going ultimately to win, one way or the other.
Comment from Adri7enne
Ah, gee, what fun, Snod. I love your characters. Annabelle sounds like she could be one of yours. Smart kid with an attitude. And your little Bogey Man is an endearing little creature, timid and uncertain and easy prey for a smart kid like Annabelle. We are sure to have fun with this one. Can't wait to open the next chapter.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2010
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Ah, gee, what fun, Snod. I love your characters. Annabelle sounds like she could be one of yours. Smart kid with an attitude. And your little Bogey Man is an endearing little creature, timid and uncertain and easy prey for a smart kid like Annabelle. We are sure to have fun with this one. Can't wait to open the next chapter.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2010
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Thanks. Glad you liked it
Comment from afternoonlight
We are still reading the story so we are on to the next chapter, both of us are enjoying your writing and story, very clever and entertaining.
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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2010
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We are still reading the story so we are on to the next chapter, both of us are enjoying your writing and story, very clever and entertaining.
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Comment Written 20-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2010
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You're very kind, thank you
Comment from tspencer
I am a sucker for stories that feature precocious little girl protagonist who don't any crap. Annabelle is awesome! I was chuckling all the way to the end of the story. I will be adding you to my favorites list!
tspencer
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2010
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I am a sucker for stories that feature precocious little girl protagonist who don't any crap. Annabelle is awesome! I was chuckling all the way to the end of the story. I will be adding you to my favorites list!
tspencer
Comment Written 20-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2010
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You're very kind. I'm glad you liked it
Comment from adewpearl
Oh, this is so much fun - this poor novice bogey man who has been threatened with demotion and having to eat slugs and scare frogs and worms if he doesn't tell this delightfully feisty little girl sufficiently gory, scary stories. I love her. She is so my kind of kid - I'm really not about wimpy kids. I did not raise wimpy kids. LOL I can't wait to hear the stories he tells to save himself, filled with blood and guts and stuff. :-) Brooke
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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2010
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Oh, this is so much fun - this poor novice bogey man who has been threatened with demotion and having to eat slugs and scare frogs and worms if he doesn't tell this delightfully feisty little girl sufficiently gory, scary stories. I love her. She is so my kind of kid - I'm really not about wimpy kids. I did not raise wimpy kids. LOL I can't wait to hear the stories he tells to save himself, filled with blood and guts and stuff. :-) Brooke
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Comment Written 20-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2010
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Thanks. I've already posted a couple, desperately trying to remember how to move them into books. I hope he doesn't disappoint