Belated Gratitude
A poem strictly for the birds.25 total reviews
Comment from anne1204
Beautifully written poem. Excellent rhythm to your lines. I love all poetry about nature. This one is very cute. Good luck in the contest. Anne 1204
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2010
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Beautifully written poem. Excellent rhythm to your lines. I love all poetry about nature. This one is very cute. Good luck in the contest. Anne 1204
Comment Written 08-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2010
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Thank you so much. I'm very glad to know you enjoyed this 's'less poem.
Comment from S.Yocom
You succeeded very well in writing a pretty little rhyming poem without the use of the letter S. I would have enjoyed it even if I didn't realize that there was no S.
Sally
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2010
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You succeeded very well in writing a pretty little rhyming poem without the use of the letter S. I would have enjoyed it even if I didn't realize that there was no S.
Sally
Comment Written 08-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2010
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Thanks so much Sally! What a nice thing to say about my poem for the birds.
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello author,
I enjoyed this poem and its message. Like the bird that was never let it, many have love all around them, but never let it and sadly never experiences its sweet melody.
A soft, but thought-provoking poem.
Regards, LateBloomer
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2010
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Hello author,
I enjoyed this poem and its message. Like the bird that was never let it, many have love all around them, but never let it and sadly never experiences its sweet melody.
A soft, but thought-provoking poem.
Regards, LateBloomer
Comment Written 08-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2010
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I loved your take on this poem, LB, and thank you from the bottom of my heart for your kind and perceptive comments.
Comment from Deejharrington
The best of luck in the contest. You really made me chuckle. I love watching the birds. And I have two cats who would just love if I invited a few in. Though the birds would not appreciate it. A very enjoyable read.
dj
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2010
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The best of luck in the contest. You really made me chuckle. I love watching the birds. And I have two cats who would just love if I invited a few in. Though the birds would not appreciate it. A very enjoyable read.
dj
Comment Written 08-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2010
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I'm so happy that you got a chuckle out of this little poem. It was a bit challenging to write two verses with no 's' anywhere, but if you liked it, I'm glad I made the effort. : ) Thank you for your review.
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you're welcome
deb
Comment from Brad Sterling
Strictly for the birds - great heading for this humorous poem - not so easy without using letter S but this one does so with good rhythm and rhyme - moreover a nice story - good luck in contest....Brad.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2010
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Strictly for the birds - great heading for this humorous poem - not so easy without using letter S but this one does so with good rhythm and rhyme - moreover a nice story - good luck in contest....Brad.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2010
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Thank you so much Brad! I'm overwhelmed! Your generous review is almost better than bird songs! :p
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You're very welcome - continued good luck with writing...Brad.
Comment from Frances Jean
Well done! Great little poem obeying the requirements of the competition. Lovely juxtaposition between the picture and poem. Flows nicely along with good end rhyming. Good luck Frances
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2010
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Well done! Great little poem obeying the requirements of the competition. Lovely juxtaposition between the picture and poem. Flows nicely along with good end rhyming. Good luck Frances
Comment Written 08-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2010
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I liked your specific comments about my poem, Frances. Thanks so much for taking time to review this one.
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This is a lovely, creative poem to have been written without the letter "s." The rhymes and meter are perfectly done and the subject charming. Best of luck to you. Jeanie MErcer
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2010
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This is a lovely, creative poem to have been written without the letter "s." The rhymes and meter are perfectly done and the subject charming. Best of luck to you. Jeanie MErcer
Comment Written 07-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2010
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My thanks to you, for this delightful review. I'm glad you appreciated this little poem, for the birds. :^)
Comment from Teri7
This is a very good contest entry you have penned without using the letter S. I have not tried that yet. Great job. Good luck. Hugs, Teri
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2010
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This is a very good contest entry you have penned without using the letter S. I have not tried that yet. Great job. Good luck. Hugs, Teri
Comment Written 07-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2010
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Thank you Teri! I'm glad you liked this 's-less' poem. You should take the challenge. It is always fun to try these things.
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I was going to but every word I could think of had an S in it. Hugs, Teri
Comment from KeepSmiling
I really enjoyed this poem! I love the way the abab quatrain format flows smoothly, a thought-provoking message about appreciating the birds, and all without the letter s! Well done. Good luck in the voting booths.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2010
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I really enjoyed this poem! I love the way the abab quatrain format flows smoothly, a thought-provoking message about appreciating the birds, and all without the letter s! Well done. Good luck in the voting booths.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2010
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Thanks so much for your sweet review. I'm glad to have your wonderful and encouraging words.
Comment from Valkarie
I like his because...Your poem is so visual one can see your little bird. A nice and visual piece concise and quite emotional, with a very good balance. The rhythm of this piece captures the tension of the imagery in its entirety. A well put together poem that is very creative.
Valkarie...
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2010
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I like his because...Your poem is so visual one can see your little bird. A nice and visual piece concise and quite emotional, with a very good balance. The rhythm of this piece captures the tension of the imagery in its entirety. A well put together poem that is very creative.
Valkarie...
Comment Written 07-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2010
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I sincerely appreciate your comments on this poem, Valkarie. How nice of you to call it 'creative.' Words a writer loves to hear, most certainly.
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It was my pleasure.
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