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31 total reviews
Comment from G.Denton
I really like this, because I can relate to it! I imagine quite a few people can... wouldn't actually class myself as a "poet" but emotions crashing about in my heart and coming out via words on paper (or through keyboard to computer screen!) is a very accurate description. Like it like it like it!
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2010
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I really like this, because I can relate to it! I imagine quite a few people can... wouldn't actually class myself as a "poet" but emotions crashing about in my heart and coming out via words on paper (or through keyboard to computer screen!) is a very accurate description. Like it like it like it!
Comment Written 03-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2010
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thank you g. :)
Comment from percival86jack
YUP! That describes us crazy bunch of rhymers. Some would call it an obsession... they are right! Kudos... hugs, Jack xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2010
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YUP! That describes us crazy bunch of rhymers. Some would call it an obsession... they are right! Kudos... hugs, Jack xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Comment Written 05-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2010
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LOL! thanx jack! :)
Comment from Nicki_Mist
Good luck in this contest you have entered. I think you have a good chance since this is good with imagery and word usage is very nice. Great poem and keep on writing.
Nicole
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
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Good luck in this contest you have entered. I think you have a good chance since this is good with imagery and word usage is very nice. Great poem and keep on writing.
Nicole
Comment Written 04-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
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thank you nicole :)
Comment from bhogg
Shelley - I just got a laugh, not from your poem but from your "about Shelley Kaye". A co-worker came up behind me and tried to brush your tiny cockroach off my screen.
I really liked your poem. I'm always amazed how good poets take a tight constraint of "rules" and it doesn't faze them at all. Describing a poet the way you did is brilliant. Of course, I write mostly prose, and think us on that side suffer the same.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2010
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Shelley - I just got a laugh, not from your poem but from your "about Shelley Kaye". A co-worker came up behind me and tried to brush your tiny cockroach off my screen.
I really liked your poem. I'm always amazed how good poets take a tight constraint of "rules" and it doesn't faze them at all. Describing a poet the way you did is brilliant. Of course, I write mostly prose, and think us on that side suffer the same.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2010
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LOL! so funny! hehe :)
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Shelley Kaye ....
Your tame Fly really is a source of distraction!!
I like what you have written here about Poets, especially the bit about 'words crashing in their hearts.'
Thank you for sharing this with us and, as it is a Contest entry, I wish you well.
With love from ..... Nanette Mary.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2010
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Hullo Shelley Kaye ....
Your tame Fly really is a source of distraction!!
I like what you have written here about Poets, especially the bit about 'words crashing in their hearts.'
Thank you for sharing this with us and, as it is a Contest entry, I wish you well.
With love from ..... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2010
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hehe thanx nanette! :)
Comment from Joan E.
I thoroughly enjoyed your "oceans" metaphor with the word-waves "crashing." I can relate! Best wishes in the cinquain contest.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2010
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I thoroughly enjoyed your "oceans" metaphor with the word-waves "crashing." I can relate! Best wishes in the cinquain contest.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2010
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thanx joan :)
Comment from el twelve
very well written nice use of words, could feel the emotion and the crashing in my heart. it was kind of romantic if you are a poet. thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2010
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very well written nice use of words, could feel the emotion and the crashing in my heart. it was kind of romantic if you are a poet. thanks for sharing
Comment Written 03-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2010
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thank you :)
Comment from Bellringer
Very good cinquain. There are moments when the silent words we put on the page resonate with the reader. And there are also moments when the words flow from page to eye to mind like a slow, summer-kissed river. Well done. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2010
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Very good cinquain. There are moments when the silent words we put on the page resonate with the reader. And there are also moments when the words flow from page to eye to mind like a slow, summer-kissed river. Well done. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2010
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thnak you bell :)
Comment from samandlancelot
words crashing in their hearts (I liked this line best, and then I read the next line. Then I thought perhaps the second line was best.)
I liked your poem.
Patricia
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2010
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words crashing in their hearts (I liked this line best, and then I read the next line. Then I thought perhaps the second line was best.)
I liked your poem.
Patricia
Comment Written 03-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2010
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thank you patricia :)
Comment from missy98writer
shelley kaye,
your cinquain poetry is in perfect form and your syllable count is spot on of 2/4/6/8/2. Excellent tribute to poets. Great us of metaphors with the terms 'words crashing in their hearts' and 'oceans of emotion.' Your cinquain poem titled 'poets' is a fabulous entry in the contest. Good luck talented poet.
Melissa.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2010
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shelley kaye,
your cinquain poetry is in perfect form and your syllable count is spot on of 2/4/6/8/2. Excellent tribute to poets. Great us of metaphors with the terms 'words crashing in their hearts' and 'oceans of emotion.' Your cinquain poem titled 'poets' is a fabulous entry in the contest. Good luck talented poet.
Melissa.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2010
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thank you missy :)