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Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "The Perfect Story"
Collection of Flash, Micro, etc.

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Comment from IndianaIrish
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HA! This is great, Carol! You're on a roll with these micro flashes and they are written so well. Wish you could have entered them in the contest,. but so glad you posted them for us to enjoy.
Indy :>)

 Comment Written 12-May-2010

reply by the author on 15-May-2010
    Karyn,

    Yes, I had fun writing them and all the laughs it gave others. Thank you...CArol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Oh so sensual and again in only a few words. Great job and to think it takes me 60,000 words to get to that point. I am impressed.

 Comment Written 12-May-2010

reply by the author on 15-May-2010
    Barbara,

    I struggle harder with these short stories than I do with the long ones. Go figure! Smiles, Carol
Comment from Judith Ann
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I just bet this scenario plays out somewhere often. This is an enjoyable and light-hearted piece to read. My computer screen was beginning to steam up for a moment. LOL You write tight and to the point. Well done. -Judy

 Comment Written 12-May-2010

reply by the author on 15-May-2010
    Judy,

    As always, I truly appreciate the time you took to read my story and for your gracious comments. Thank you...Carol

Comment from Juliette Chamberlain
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Taking part in the action is really so much better than reading about it. You obviously thought the same!
Tastefully told.

Juliette

 Comment Written 12-May-2010

reply by the author on 15-May-2010
    Juliette,

    s always, I truly appreciate the time you took to read my story and for your gracious comments. Thank you...Carol
Comment from fictionwriter
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Oh yeah, seems like making the story would be tons better than reading it on the pages. That's what I keep telling my husband. LOL. Great job.

 Comment Written 12-May-2010

reply by the author on 15-May-2010
    Joy,

    Me too! I wonder where those days slipped away too. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sharesy
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What a tease, turning on the light in the middle of everything. I enjoyed this little story. It's difficult to create characters with any depth in 200 words, although you did manage to establish a moment of passion. Very nice, Carol.

Best regards,
Sharesy

 Comment Written 12-May-2010

reply by the author on 15-May-2010
    Sharesy,

    Sorry that I am so late with my thank you..Life just seems to get away from me. Smiles, Carol
Comment from cheyennewy
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Hi Carol,

I like the man's story the best, as well (grin) A great micro fiction story. Clever and innovative, which I think is most likely your motto! Blessings, chey

 Comment Written 12-May-2010

reply by the author on 15-May-2010
    Chey,

    Thank you for reading, enjoying and offering such a warm response. Carol
Comment from vandawalker
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Good writing and good humor. It's amazing to be able to get a story with a good plot and interesting situation to become a whole story.

 Comment Written 12-May-2010

reply by the author on 15-May-2010
    vandawalker,

    Thanks for the vote of confidence and enjoyment. CArol
Comment from jadapenn
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Hahaha - you are a smily child. This was also great. Now how come you missed the deadline. Oh geez, perhaps I should check my own contests file to see what I never entered.
I liked this little romantic interlude. Well done. luv jada

 Comment Written 12-May-2010

reply by the author on 15-May-2010
    Jada,

    I missed the deadline because family called and when I got back the contest was filled. Always a day late and a dollar short as they say. Smiles, Carol
Comment from RobinWrites
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I like his story better also. I love reading micro fiction and it still amazes me that so much can be said with so few lines. Great job and loved the images racing through my mind.

 Comment Written 12-May-2010

reply by the author on 12-May-2010
    Robin,

    Yes, he did seem to have a yummier storyline in my mind. Thanks for the great comments as always. Smiles, Carol