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Comment from Josipher32
Shell,
This cinquain is absolutely perfect! I love the way it starts out with you incenuating one thing (sensual) and then ending up with a very innocent ending. Excellent work. Perfect reverse cinquain as well.
reply by the author on 04-May-2010
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Shell,
This cinquain is absolutely perfect! I love the way it starts out with you incenuating one thing (sensual) and then ending up with a very innocent ending. Excellent work. Perfect reverse cinquain as well.
Comment Written 04-May-2010
reply by the author on 04-May-2010
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than kyou josipher! :-)
Comment from MizKat
It's neat how you used two pictures with your poem. I didn't know you could do that or how. The first part sounds like it's about lovemaking when I assume all of it is about the ice cream cone.
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It's neat how you used two pictures with your poem. I didn't know you could do that or how. The first part sounds like it's about lovemaking when I assume all of it is about the ice cream cone.
Comment Written 04-May-2010
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hehe yep :)
Comment from Valkarie
I like this because...One dares to write on the risk element, which in this case works so well. It is concise and a very visual piece, very artistic and intriguing.
A creative and inspiring piece of writing eloquently written.
Valkarie...
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I like this because...One dares to write on the risk element, which in this case works so well. It is concise and a very visual piece, very artistic and intriguing.
A creative and inspiring piece of writing eloquently written.
Valkarie...
Comment Written 04-May-2010
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thankyalots :)
Comment from jwlee211
For shame. You do a great job of creating a poem with double meaning or making the reader ashamed of himself. Great work.
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For shame. You do a great job of creating a poem with double meaning or making the reader ashamed of himself. Great work.
Comment Written 04-May-2010
reply by the author on 04-May-2010
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LOL! thanx! :)
Comment from winsome
if this poem isn't the essence of double meanings I don't know what is. This is so well done and a great contest contender. Best of luck in the contest. I will be looking for this.
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if this poem isn't the essence of double meanings I don't know what is. This is so well done and a great contest contender. Best of luck in the contest. I will be looking for this.
Comment Written 04-May-2010
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hehehe ;-)
Comment from IanC
Charming and sexy is not an easy combination to pull off yet you have done it. It is playful and your choice of art is appropriate and adds to the playfulness. Well done, Ian
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Charming and sexy is not an easy combination to pull off yet you have done it. It is playful and your choice of art is appropriate and adds to the playfulness. Well done, Ian
Comment Written 04-May-2010
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hehe thank you ian :)
Comment from rama devi
Okay, I must admit this is humorous when you read the second half, but sine you open this with a sensual photo, and the words can also be read 'ahem, uh, metaphorically, I think his should have a sexual warning on it. LOL
Clever gotchya effect. Good entry for the contest. With double cinquain mirrored.
Warmly, rd
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Okay, I must admit this is humorous when you read the second half, but sine you open this with a sensual photo, and the words can also be read 'ahem, uh, metaphorically, I think his should have a sexual warning on it. LOL
Clever gotchya effect. Good entry for the contest. With double cinquain mirrored.
Warmly, rd
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Comment Written 04-May-2010
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LOL okay will put a warning on! thanx rd! :)
Comment from ccbttr
this was great. i'm not going to lie, it made me laugh and i love the pictures you used to trick everyone! i also like your use of no punctuation and capitalization's. it fit well with the overall telling of the poem!
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this was great. i'm not going to lie, it made me laugh and i love the pictures you used to trick everyone! i also like your use of no punctuation and capitalization's. it fit well with the overall telling of the poem!
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Comment Written 04-May-2010
reply by the author on 04-May-2010
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thank you :)