Dear Life
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "Dear Mood"Addressing different themes in a form of a letter
22 total reviews
Comment from Judi
Dear Pupa:
I could not have said this better if I was writing about myself! Especially, "At times your temper swings me violently between tears and joy, I totally lost control when you play and kick me around as if I was your toy." The entire message seems to be embedded in my mind -- might we have the same 'Mood'??
Each word has a meaning I understand completely. I loved this. Judi
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2010
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Dear Pupa:
I could not have said this better if I was writing about myself! Especially, "At times your temper swings me violently between tears and joy, I totally lost control when you play and kick me around as if I was your toy." The entire message seems to be embedded in my mind -- might we have the same 'Mood'??
Each word has a meaning I understand completely. I loved this. Judi
Comment Written 29-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2010
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So it seems, Judi, LOL. Thanks so much for your encouraging review, I appreciate it very much.
Love
Pupa
Comment from Gert sherwood
Good evening PUPA
I live you tercets and couplet rhyming
Yes you are so right about the way moods can make us happy or very down and out.
You last line is very poweful
Saying you wear the crown and have control over any sad moods that try and control you.
Gert
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2010
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Good evening PUPA
I live you tercets and couplet rhyming
Yes you are so right about the way moods can make us happy or very down and out.
You last line is very poweful
Saying you wear the crown and have control over any sad moods that try and control you.
Gert
Comment Written 29-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2010
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Thanks Gert, last line is what I hope to be able to do, the intention is there.
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Pupa
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aYou are welcome PUPa. I will see you when I return to Fanstory
Gert
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Have a good rest, Gert and God bless you.
Love
Pupa
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Thank you PUPA
Gert
Comment from Teri7
My friend this is a very good poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Hugs, Teri
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2010
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My friend this is a very good poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Hugs, Teri
Comment Written 29-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2010
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Thanks Teri, always glad to see your review.
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Pupa
Comment from munira
I love your work,I like the way you bring mood out has a person,and the resolve you had to take charge of your life.Your work is truly inspiring.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2010
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I love your work,I like the way you bring mood out has a person,and the resolve you had to take charge of your life.Your work is truly inspiring.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2010
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Munira, thank you so much for your most encouraging review, most appreciated.
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Pupa
Comment from amada
Bravo dear Pupa. I like your last phrase, teach that darn mood who is the boss. No kidding, those moods attack me as well...sometimes i win, as today. Best wishes to you dear friend.
reply by the author on 01-May-2010
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Bravo dear Pupa. I like your last phrase, teach that darn mood who is the boss. No kidding, those moods attack me as well...sometimes i win, as today. Best wishes to you dear friend.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 01-May-2010
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Amada, we have to remember to win, before they take hold of us. I am trying now. Thanks for your comments in this kind review.
Love
Pupa
Comment from dportwood
PUPA,
Great poetic discourse on moods that are sometimes handed to us by life. But you have discovered resolution in the face of adversity - take charge. Well done.
Duane
reply by the author on 01-May-2010
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PUPA,
Great poetic discourse on moods that are sometimes handed to us by life. But you have discovered resolution in the face of adversity - take charge. Well done.
Duane
Comment Written 29-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 01-May-2010
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Thanks Duane, yes, I am starting to learn how to take charge, hope I can. I appreciate your comments vey much.
Love
Pupa
Comment from mtngalofnc
Hi PUPA,
The art fits well with your words and in your poetry you express well those roller coaster emotions from estatic to suffering depression. The rhyme and flow are good and your meaning clear. Thank you for sharing.
Becky
reply by the author on 01-May-2010
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Hi PUPA,
The art fits well with your words and in your poetry you express well those roller coaster emotions from estatic to suffering depression. The rhyme and flow are good and your meaning clear. Thank you for sharing.
Becky
Comment Written 29-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 01-May-2010
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Thanks for your very positive comments, Becky. I appreciate it very much.
Love
Pupa
Comment from fastdigits
Such a well written diary letter set
in rhyme, but also with passion and
laying out bare your soul to see.
A tale of the battle within you to
overcome the incidents that drag you
down into the depths of despair and
your realization that you are the only
one who has the power over your moods.
As always, well done.
reply by the author on 01-May-2010
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Such a well written diary letter set
in rhyme, but also with passion and
laying out bare your soul to see.
A tale of the battle within you to
overcome the incidents that drag you
down into the depths of despair and
your realization that you are the only
one who has the power over your moods.
As always, well done.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 01-May-2010
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Thanks fastdigits, your comments are always positive and encouraging.
Love
Pupa
Comment from Krugerrand
This is a great way to tell your mood who's in charge. It certainly does seem sometimes that it has a mind of its own.
The artwork did not come up for me...don't know if that's a problem for all.
Thank you for sharing this poem letter.
reply by the author on 01-May-2010
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This is a great way to tell your mood who's in charge. It certainly does seem sometimes that it has a mind of its own.
The artwork did not come up for me...don't know if that's a problem for all.
Thank you for sharing this poem letter.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 01-May-2010
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Thanks Krugerrand, your comments are encouraging and appreciate that very much. I hope next time my choice of artwork would appeal to you!LOL.
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Pupa
Comment from Connie P
Very well done. As I read I thought about the need to take control over our moods, sometimes I'm successful and sometimes not, then you wrote it in your ending. I enjoyed the read, very realistic and true to life.
Connie
reply by the author on 01-May-2010
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Very well done. As I read I thought about the need to take control over our moods, sometimes I'm successful and sometimes not, then you wrote it in your ending. I enjoyed the read, very realistic and true to life.
Connie
Comment Written 29-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 01-May-2010
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Connie, thanks for this positive review and kind rating. Always appreciated.
Love
Pupa
