Flash Fiction
Viewing comments for Chapter 43 "What a Beauty!"Collection of Flash, Micro, etc.
58 total reviews
Comment from knowledge
This is a nice little childrens' fairy tale. I enjoyed it. It is very well written. Good luck on the contest.
Thank You My Friend,
Knowledge
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2010
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This is a nice little childrens' fairy tale. I enjoyed it. It is very well written. Good luck on the contest.
Thank You My Friend,
Knowledge
Comment Written 18-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2010
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Knowledge,
I appreciate your kindness and for the wonderful review. Smiles to you, CArol
Comment from warbler
I enjoyed reading this little story. You put a lot of story into those few words. I liked the ending and of course the orange socks. Well done!
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
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I enjoyed reading this little story. You put a lot of story into those few words. I liked the ending and of course the orange socks. Well done!
Comment Written 18-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
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warbler
Appreciate your kind review and glad that you enjoyed the silly little ditty. Smiles to you, Carol
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Carol,
Don't know where you got the picture from but it is perfect for your story. I love fantasy and magical writes and you have done both in this well written story. Love it! Good luck in the contest....blessings...chey
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
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Hi Carol,
Don't know where you got the picture from but it is perfect for your story. I love fantasy and magical writes and you have done both in this well written story. Love it! Good luck in the contest....blessings...chey
Comment Written 18-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
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Chey,
The picture was an old video of me...LOL Did you you recognize it? Thanks for the wonderful review. Smiles to you, Carol
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Comment from flygirl254
Now that's a very cute story. It gives me a very fairy-tale feeling. I've alwayed liked the movie "Shrek", partly because Fiona's beauty is as an ogre, and in the second movie she actually chooses to stay happy and ogre-ish. I like the idea that a handsome prince can see through the spells and into the real heart of a good woman who will love him. Awe shucks, now I'm feeling all warm and mushy inside. Great work and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
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Now that's a very cute story. It gives me a very fairy-tale feeling. I've alwayed liked the movie "Shrek", partly because Fiona's beauty is as an ogre, and in the second movie she actually chooses to stay happy and ogre-ish. I like the idea that a handsome prince can see through the spells and into the real heart of a good woman who will love him. Awe shucks, now I'm feeling all warm and mushy inside. Great work and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 18-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
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flygirl,
Wonderful...Enjoy that warm and mushy feeling...It's great@! Thank you for the kind and generous review. Smiles to you, Carol
Comment from BJean
Nice he could see the warm heart past the outward apprearance and made His choice accordingly! If only more would look at the heart!! Great micro flash story that kept me reading, Carol. Love, jean
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
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Nice he could see the warm heart past the outward apprearance and made His choice accordingly! If only more would look at the heart!! Great micro flash story that kept me reading, Carol. Love, jean
Comment Written 18-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
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Jean,
Yes...I wish others would look below the surface...Thanks for the kind review. Smiles, Carol
Comment from anabelle
And so the wicked witch wins the prize (at least we hope he's a prize - maybe he's really a frog in disguise?).
Great micro fiction. Best of luck in the contest.
Regards, anabelle
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
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And so the wicked witch wins the prize (at least we hope he's a prize - maybe he's really a frog in disguise?).
Great micro fiction. Best of luck in the contest.
Regards, anabelle
Comment Written 18-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
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anabelle,
Yes, one never knows in kindgdom land, does one...Smiles, Carol
Comment from JeffreyStone
Great job. I loved the visual. It is a difficult task to conceive and write a brisk tale in so few words. Nothing wasted here. Thanks for an entertaining presentation. Good luck in the contest. Jeffrey
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
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Great job. I loved the visual. It is a difficult task to conceive and write a brisk tale in so few words. Nothing wasted here. Thanks for an entertaining presentation. Good luck in the contest. Jeffrey
Comment Written 18-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
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Jeffrey
Yes, I think these short ones are harder to write than the others..Can't describe anything and it's hard to give a visual.
smiles. Carol
Comment from Ponder
Hi Begin Again,
I thought this was a great 'don't judge a book by it's cover' kind of tale. How nice it would be if prince's always looked at the beauty within - ah well.
Good job with the contest parameters.
Jules
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
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Hi Begin Again,
I thought this was a great 'don't judge a book by it's cover' kind of tale. How nice it would be if prince's always looked at the beauty within - ah well.
Good job with the contest parameters.
Jules
Comment Written 18-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
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Jules,
Yes...you never really know the true person just by looking at them. Thanks for the kind review. Carol
Comment from ladybird
Well, you did it again. Coming up with a charming story in so few words. A fun read. I like the visual of orange socks and combat boots, lol. I love the dancing witch. Well done.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
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Well, you did it again. Coming up with a charming story in so few words. A fun read. I like the visual of orange socks and combat boots, lol. I love the dancing witch. Well done.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
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ladybird,
Thank you for enjoying this fun story. It has a good message about judging people. Smiles, CArol
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You're welcome.
Comment from patmedium
Carol... how hilarious are you ? Heavens above, friend... you will take a lot of beating, especially with that hilarious dancing 'lady'. Pat.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
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Carol... how hilarious are you ? Heavens above, friend... you will take a lot of beating, especially with that hilarious dancing 'lady'. Pat.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
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Pat,
That was from my old photo album...LOL Thanks for enjoying the silly story. Smiles, Carol
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It was a truly memorable read. Pat.
