Danny Boy
Little Boy Lost17 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
Hello,
Been in the same situation and would have given my life to have my son walk through the door and say I love you...
Carol
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2010
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Hello,
Been in the same situation and would have given my life to have my son walk through the door and say I love you...
Carol
Comment Written 16-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2010
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Oh, Carol, that would have been a terrible experience. Thank you for your review. Warmest regards.
Comment from warbler
This is a wonderful little story. It has a beginning, middle and end. The story made me feel relief and thankful.
It meets that requirements of the assignment. Well done!
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2010
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This is a wonderful little story. It has a beginning, middle and end. The story made me feel relief and thankful.
It meets that requirements of the assignment. Well done!
Comment Written 16-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2010
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Thank you warbler, for your kind words and generous review and rating. Warmest regards.
Comment from adewpearl
Your story without an S in it is quite good - it tells a complete story, has emotion, conflict, resolution, and it tells a tale so many parents can relate to - so many of us have had that heartpumping experience! Brooke :-)
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2010
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Your story without an S in it is quite good - it tells a complete story, has emotion, conflict, resolution, and it tells a tale so many parents can relate to - so many of us have had that heartpumping experience! Brooke :-)
Comment Written 16-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2010
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Thank you Brooke, for your kind words and generous rating. Warmest regards.
Comment from Kaiyah
a well writen piece which i shall believe to be a strong contender for the competition.
you have been able to make writing without the letter S seem so simple
no errors foun and no suggestions to be made
an enjoyable piece. well done and goodluck
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2010
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a well writen piece which i shall believe to be a strong contender for the competition.
you have been able to make writing without the letter S seem so simple
no errors foun and no suggestions to be made
an enjoyable piece. well done and goodluck
Comment Written 16-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2010
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Thank you Kaiyah, for your kind words and generous rating. Warmest regards.
Comment from Sandollar
This was one of the better stories. I could actually feel tension as the mother waited for word of her son. I also knew what it was like when he walked in late and sorry. I feel this has a good chance in the contest. Good luck. I loved the art.
I found no errors.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2010
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This was one of the better stories. I could actually feel tension as the mother waited for word of her son. I also knew what it was like when he walked in late and sorry. I feel this has a good chance in the contest. Good luck. I loved the art.
I found no errors.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2010
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Thank you Sandollar, for your review and encouragement, and of course for your generous rating. Warmest wishes
Comment from robertdarkstars
A very clever poem/storey that manages not to use the letter (S) in its content. This must be difficult to do as well as making the piece make sense as well. Very good effort. Well worth 5 stars.
Robert D
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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2010
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A very clever poem/storey that manages not to use the letter (S) in its content. This must be difficult to do as well as making the piece make sense as well. Very good effort. Well worth 5 stars.
Robert D
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Comment Written 16-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2010
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Thank you Robert, yes it is difficult, but it was interesting to try. Took a while, but I was happy with the result. Warmest regards
Comment from Realist101
VERY good! This is perfect. I love it, and admire your skill, the fewer the words, the harder it is to express a thought or feeling. :) Susan
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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2010
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VERY good! This is perfect. I love it, and admire your skill, the fewer the words, the harder it is to express a thought or feeling. :) Susan
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Comment Written 16-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2010
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Thank you Susan, I appreciate you warm and generous review and that string of stars. Warmest regards
