POEMS, SONGS AND NOTES
Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "The World Awaits"When I dabble at things.....
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Comment from MJMuraco
This a very nice entry for the contest. Short sweet and too the point. The picture of the hands reaching for each other complements the poem nicely.
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This a very nice entry for the contest. Short sweet and too the point. The picture of the hands reaching for each other complements the poem nicely.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2010
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MJ
Thanks for the comments and generous review. Smiles, Carol
Comment from melyuki
another 6er sis, but this I really really luv... such beautiful choice of words to say so much. the meaning and the feeling flowing in these words is just awesome.. I am wrapped in its emotional embrace and think you have done a wonderful job of creating poetic splendour here. luv it.. and you... hugs always sis, your little sis from down under. xxxxx
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another 6er sis, but this I really really luv... such beautiful choice of words to say so much. the meaning and the feeling flowing in these words is just awesome.. I am wrapped in its emotional embrace and think you have done a wonderful job of creating poetic splendour here. luv it.. and you... hugs always sis, your little sis from down under. xxxxx
Comment Written 09-Feb-2010
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Sis,
I think this is one of the ones I would include in that book of short stories...this one tugged at me as well. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Belinda
Which came first, the idea of the tetractys or the artwork. All I know is that the contest sprouts your imagination, and I like the result... :)
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Which came first, the idea of the tetractys or the artwork. All I know is that the contest sprouts your imagination, and I like the result... :)
Comment Written 09-Feb-2010
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Belinda,
This one came from me and then I searched for the artwork...The reaching out of hands was perfect, I thought. Thank you...Carol
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Carol,
a wonderful entry for the contest I don't know how may times Stan and I have done so
Take hold of each others hand, (( and say ))
Together, let's expand our boundaries
Gert
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Hello Carol,
a wonderful entry for the contest I don't know how may times Stan and I have done so
Take hold of each others hand, (( and say ))
Together, let's expand our boundaries
Gert
Comment Written 09-Feb-2010
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Gert
You two share the perfect love and it shows in all your writing...It's marvelous. I am glad that my poem was something you could relate to..Smiles, Carol
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You are welcome Carol
Please take care.
Gert
Comment from fionageorge
Carol, another lovely and powerful poem, sending a message of empowerment through relying on others. I love it, as well as the picture, which is complementary to your words.
Good luck in the contest
Warmest regards
Marijke
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
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Carol, another lovely and powerful poem, sending a message of empowerment through relying on others. I love it, as well as the picture, which is complementary to your words.
Good luck in the contest
Warmest regards
Marijke
Comment Written 09-Feb-2010
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Marijke
Thank you for your generous and thoughtful comments. Smiles, Carol
Comment from RebelRose
Good poem. Very few words that send a powerful message.
I like the picture you chose to accompany the poem, it really presents it well.
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Good poem. Very few words that send a powerful message.
I like the picture you chose to accompany the poem, it really presents it well.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2010
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Patty,
Thank you for your generous and thoughtful comments. Carol
Comment from misscookie
I love the artwork I think it tells it all
Your words are so pure filled with love and understanding.
Good luck in the contest.
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I love the artwork I think it tells it all
Your words are so pure filled with love and understanding.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2010
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Cookie
Hey, sweet friend. Glad you enjoyed this little poem of mine. Thank you...Carol
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your welcome I love all your writes
Comment from adewpearl
I really like this, Carol - your poem is in good syllable form for the tetractys and conveys a most romantic and tender message of the possibilities becoming part of a couple affords both people :-) Brooke
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I really like this, Carol - your poem is in good syllable form for the tetractys and conveys a most romantic and tender message of the possibilities becoming part of a couple affords both people :-) Brooke
Comment Written 09-Feb-2010
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Brooke,
Your thoughts on my poetry is always extremely appreciated. Thank you...Smiles, CArol
Comment from Trybuck
This one could almost be an entry into the Valentines love poem contest.
Two together can expand many boundaries.
Well done, Buck
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This one could almost be an entry into the Valentines love poem contest.
Two together can expand many boundaries.
Well done, Buck
Comment Written 09-Feb-2010
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Buck,
I'm glad you felt the love between the lines...Thank you. Smiles, Carol
Comment from lola29
Carol, I think you've chosen artwork that depicts your message perfectly. Once we learn to extend our hands, we are venturing into a new frontier of compassion.
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Carol, I think you've chosen artwork that depicts your message perfectly. Once we learn to extend our hands, we are venturing into a new frontier of compassion.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2010
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Lola,
Too bad so few will make that extra effort...Thanks for the kind review. Smiles, CArol