Tim Gore
Smashed Dreams17 total reviews
Comment from Poetry Beginnings
How nice, matador and folklore what a wonderful rhyme and fun meaning. I really enjoyed reading your witty Epitaph. Good luck with the contest.
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How nice, matador and folklore what a wonderful rhyme and fun meaning. I really enjoyed reading your witty Epitaph. Good luck with the contest.
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Thank you.
Comment from FredCollingwood
As an animal lover, It's good to see the underdog win for a change. Wonderful, fun poem. I enjoyed it set as an epitath.
Fred
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As an animal lover, It's good to see the underdog win for a change. Wonderful, fun poem. I enjoyed it set as an epitath.
Fred
Comment Written 31-Jan-2010
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Thank you very much.
Comment from foxtale
second line could be quite shortened.
Who met a bull once more,
would be fine. You don't need to explain the red cape.
THis could use some refining.
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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2010
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second line could be quite shortened.
Who met a bull once more,
would be fine. You don't need to explain the red cape.
THis could use some refining.
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Comment Written 31-Jan-2010
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I like my way better. Thanks anyway.
Comment from Ann Smith
What a funny creative epitaph. Visions of a matador and bull lead the mind to all kinds of blood and gore. Then unfortunately the demise of the matador. In the last line, it seems the rhythm might flow better without the word 'local.' Just a thought. ann
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What a funny creative epitaph. Visions of a matador and bull lead the mind to all kinds of blood and gore. Then unfortunately the demise of the matador. In the last line, it seems the rhythm might flow better without the word 'local.' Just a thought. ann
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Thank you.
Comment from sibhus
Ha ha I nice witty epitaph for a fledgeling matador. The ending was really fitting for an idiot that would take on a bull with a re flannel cloth. This is very funny and good luck with the contest.
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Ha ha I nice witty epitaph for a fledgeling matador. The ending was really fitting for an idiot that would take on a bull with a re flannel cloth. This is very funny and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2010
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Thanks a lot.
Comment from chaswriter
blind author - This a fun epitaph about the wannabe matador. Good rhyme and I like the rhythm of the read. Good luck in the contest.
Charlie
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blind author - This a fun epitaph about the wannabe matador. Good rhyme and I like the rhythm of the read. Good luck in the contest.
Charlie
Comment Written 31-Jan-2010
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Thank you.
Comment from lola29
Have you ever seen the artistry of a matador? It is breaktaking. Your entry is very well thought out and I applaud your tribute to these brave people.
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Have you ever seen the artistry of a matador? It is breaktaking. Your entry is very well thought out and I applaud your tribute to these brave people.
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Comment Written 31-Jan-2010
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Thank you.
